Okay, so, I read this on DW from the TWH rec but came here to comment and hm. I got so swept up in the genius of their game, and the perfect characterization when you wrote it, that it felt like the "just how close someone can be and remain clueless when they're willing to overlook what they're not expecting" note was directed right at me, even though I DID see the 'warning' and I DID know something was up. I was shocked, and felt stupid for it.
And then, it just got more absorbing, and phrases like 'his clit' were completely natural, the whole thing so natural. If something like this has been written this well before, I haven't read it.
Clock ticked over to 2010 while I was in the middle of reading this, and I wouldn't have noticed if not for the one firework outside bringing my attention to it. Happy New Year! I'll be starting mine feeling rather revolutionized.
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Okay, so, I read this on DW from the TWH rec but came here to comment and hm. I got so swept up in the genius of their game, and the perfect characterization when you wrote it, that it felt like the "just how close someone can be and remain clueless when they're willing to overlook what they're not expecting" note was directed right at me, even though I DID see the 'warning' and I DID know something was up. I was shocked, and felt stupid for it.
And then, it just got more absorbing, and phrases like 'his clit' were completely natural, the whole thing so natural. If something like this has been written this well before, I haven't read it.
Clock ticked over to 2010 while I was in the middle of reading this, and I wouldn't have noticed if not for the one firework outside bringing my attention to it. Happy New Year! I'll be starting mine feeling rather revolutionized.