this was great! i've got to a stage where i won't read genderswap, genderfuck, crossdressing or trans stories if they don't come with a rec from someone i trust or aren't written by an author i trust. luckily this falls into that category!!! :D
i liked all of the delicious porniness, but particularly:
Jack's palm drags lightly down Ianto's throat, coming to rest at the base. “You should see the look on your face,” Ianto says, letting Jack feel the vibration of his voice, measuring the timbre of it as well; just slightly off. Not enough to notice, unless it's being looked for. Ianto is, after all, a consummate master of disguise.
and
He's unsure if it was going to be a reprimand or indignation, just knows he doesn't want to hear it. Jack's living, breathing proof of just how close someone can be and remain clueless when they're will to overlook what they're not expecting
[although i think in that last para it should be 'willing', not 'will'!]
they both seem very real, and also quite natural and embodied. i like!
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i liked all of the delicious porniness, but particularly:
Jack's palm drags lightly down Ianto's throat, coming to rest at the base. “You should see the look on your face,” Ianto says, letting Jack feel the vibration of his voice, measuring the timbre of it as well; just slightly off. Not enough to notice, unless it's being looked for. Ianto is, after all, a consummate master of disguise.
and
He's unsure if it was going to be a reprimand or indignation, just knows he doesn't want to hear it. Jack's living, breathing proof of just how close someone can be and remain clueless when they're will to overlook what they're not expecting
[although i think in that last para it should be 'willing', not 'will'!]
they both seem very real, and also quite natural and embodied. i like!
yay you!