ext_3170 ([identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hope 2005-10-31 05:50 pm (UTC)

What? OMG.

I like how this is from Kaylee's POV. It makes it all that more poignant or something. And I enjoy that you don't give full details about what exactly happened. Oh. And this is kind of 'OMG, how will we survive, apocalypse-y' fic, isn't it? YAY!

I love the image of Jayne and Simon at the end there. And also this notion that they're all lean, kind of on the edge, nutrition-wise, probably.

wonders if Mal's cracked lip come from thirst, too, or something else

Yes.

The silence of this (in terms of voices) is gorgeous.

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