I enjoyed this a lot, even though I don't actively read Jayne/Simon. Someone else who doesn't do a lot of J/S recced it and I took a peek since I trust her opinions. Glad I read it -- you've got a great writing style and a good, strong Simon voice/feel. I especially loved the immediately-after-the-movie take you had. I've written and read lots of post-Serenity fics but this one feels the most connected, in a sense. Everyone is hurt, and there is this fog that they're all moving through and you captured it really well.

I also think it's incredibly interesting/telling that although River and Kaylee make cameos neither Mal, Zoe nor Inara do. Anyway, I didn't expect to enjoy this and here I am with a long review, heh. Go figure, huh? :)