Fic: A Fowl Morn (may turn into a fair day) [Torchwood, Jack/Ianto, wingfic]

[hope]

Title: A Fowl Morn (may turn into a fair day)
Author: Hope (angstslashhope @ LJ, hope @ Dw)
Fandom: Torchwood
Wordcount: ~11,000
Genre: wingfic, slash, approx 60% PWP (...'wingfuck' perhaps a more appropriate term?)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Warning: here be puns.
Notes: Thank you to ggreenapple, derryderrydown and cupidsbow, for beta, britpick and cheerleading!

Summary: "You're right, Sir," Ianto says, folding his arms across his chest and ignoring the irritation and anxiety being translated into the rustle of wings, pulling uncomfortably at the muscles across his shoulders, feathers brushing against his arse. "This is far from the worst thing that's ever happened to me."

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Comments

[lemniskate.livejournal.com]

This was absolutely fantastic. Absolutely. I'd say the same even without the addition of the wings, because every element, the dialogue, the interaction, the scorching-hot-sex, it was perfect; in character and interesting. Really loved this.

[todd-loves-mc.livejournal.com]

That was brilliant. I really really enjoyed that alot.

[adjovi.livejournal.com]

oh...this is just lovely. i love how you write ianto and jack--nice and complicated. and brain melty.

[hope]

Hah! Yay! I fear I always shoot myself in the foot by writing things that people don't want to read after seeing the premise. But I GUESS I WIN THIS ROUND!

:D Wheee, I'm so glad you like it. Thank you!!

[hope]

That's lovely feedback, thank you! I think I needed the wings in there to give myself something interesting to write, but it's great to hear that the story didn't necessarily entirely rest on them. Yay!

Thank you :)

[hope]

I'm glad! Thank you :D

[hope]

*beams* Thank you so much :)

[fide-et-spe.livejournal.com]

Oh I love this. It is very sweet and sexy at the same time. I adored Jack wanting to keep hold of some of the feathers, and the idea of him sleeping under a pile of them. Really like the line about irritation being a personal fetish.

[scifichicx.livejournal.com]

Ohmygod. This is one of my most embarrassing kinks but this is the kind of fic that makes it worth it. Very in character, very realistic- which isn't so easy in a crack!fic. Loved it so much.

[teaboyfan.livejournal.com]

"...how on earth he’d put up with Jack let alone get to the point of having sex with him if irritation wasn’t an obscure personal aphrodisiac is beyond him."

Nothing has summarized their relationship any more succinctly than that statement. Wingfic is not a genre I've cared much for, but this one was outstanding for its humor, eroticism, and grasp of their characters. Poor put-upon Ianto, the victim of unsympathetic puns from teammates and Jack's mindless rutting (which he actually loves).
And their underlying affection comes through clearly, which I love. Thanks for writing!

[lone-star-woman.livejournal.com]

He’s entitled to at least one outburst per personal incident with unknown alien device. It’s in the Torchwood Employee Handbook.

That line made me laugh out loud.

Great fic. Hot. I love the team's reaction (including Myfanwy) as well as the pedestrian's.

That last line is perfect.

[hope]

:) Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[hope]

Hee! To be honest, half the reason I wrote this was because I was personally sad at the lack of wing porn in the fandom. I wanted to read some, dammit! So I'm right with you there :D

Thank you!!

[hope]

*beams* Thanks for reading!! And for the lovely feedback. I'm very glad you enjoyed it :)

[hope]

:D Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

[msilverstar]

oh damn, now you made me want to write fluffy Torchwood wingfic.

[hope]

:D misswinterhill fit that bill pretty well, if you're hankering to read some!

[msilverstar]

that's great, I'll rec them both!

[hope]

:D

[cupidsbow.livejournal.com]

This is the hottest wingfic I've ever read. I love just how kinked up Jack is.

[mcparrot.livejournal.com]

Well that's a new one, but no more ridiculous than Ianto waking up a woman. Love that jack found the wings sexy - of course he would
the puns--- oh the puns!!!
Just nuts the whole thing, yet sweet, sexy and in character. What more could you want.
thank you

[hope]

He's a kinked up kinda guy!

<3

[hope]

thank you so much!! I'm very glad you enjoyed reading, it was certainly fun to write (Jack especially). Cheers :)

[lefaym.livejournal.com]

Brilliant!

[hope]

:D thank you!