Fic: Refrain (21JS)

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21 jump street (season 1), tom hanson/doug penhall, set immediately after season one episode "gotta finish the riff". see this post for visual clues. unbeta'd, probably poorly edited, blah blah.

dedicated to claireweasley and loose_your_dogs

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Comments

[irradiatedsoup.livejournal.com]

*HARTHARTHARTI'MACOPBWEEFLAIL*

This was grate, schmoe. I AM YOUR BIG FAN. I don't know why you were daunted, you have the characterisation down. I've barely read any of your stuff. Not being in the same fandoms and all, but wow, you have a knack for the visceral, descripty stuff, don't you. And also:

Tom should really leave now, just walk out and pull the door back half-closed where it was before he pushed it open to see the solid stream of water hit the back of Penhall’s neck and bedraggle the tufts of hair there and outline every curve of muscle in his back and… It’s only when the steam thickens and becomes overwhelming that Tom has to step back so he can breathe again.

That was really hot. Yes. Hotter than a scene involving blue and grey race cars should be.

In conclusion, you rock.
*fuller ass-slaps you*

[hope]

thankyou!

NOW IT'S YOUR TURN OH EM GEE I'M A COP

[jubilancy.livejournal.com]

OHHHHHYEAAAAAAAAAH.

I love that you're slashing this.

And I love this. askdlfkas;dfklaskdf;la. And you.

[hope]

how could i not slash it? <3 <3 <3 you should write some!!

[loose-your-dogs.livejournal.com]

kjhdkjfhlwskjerf! Gkjhsjfkdh jahs lhdhneasi kjaUddhh, jghzweughd isahjh!

Um. adskdfgj!

Hanhall! Eeeeeee!

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hee. hi.

[sharpest_rose.livejournal.com]

Eeee! This is grate. I need a Jump! icon.

It's all wonderfully fabulous, even by the high standards of your work. My favourite line's His face, so close, eyes clear and burning where Tom expected them to be cold, brow tense, skin of his jaw smooth over bunched muscle; like Tom’s, with the ease and shallow shame of not having to shave every day.

Yay!! <3

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yaye! for some reason i didn't get this comment notification o.O YAYE LIVEJOURNAL!

what kind of jump icon do you want? i'll make you one. a 1-800-COCAINE one?

OMG! I love you!

[(Anonymous)]

Hi, my name's Azrielle, and I'm starting a 21 Jump Street slash archive. Please please please can I post your stories on my site?? It's so hard to find JS slash! I'll make sure all credit and feedback get to you!

Please email me at: azrielle_fics@yahoo.com

*puppy dog eyes*

-Azrielle

[stimpson.livejournal.com]

Mmm, tres wunderbar! You have their interaction down pat, and I love your Tom :) :) YAYE!

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hee! i find tom harder to write than doug, but i still heart them both. glad you liked!

[sandssavvy.livejournal.com]

Tom would be harder to write then Doug wouldn't he?
Doug is kinda what happens when I watch way to much Johnny Depp, and have er a soda. That's write soda. Not anything alcoholic! *sweatdrop*
O.O
Love your Penson fics though.
Maybe I should try to make one. Ponderment...

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you should! this fandom always needs more fic. go for it!

[sandssavvy.livejournal.com]

I haven't written a slash fic yet. (I've written 4 other one-shot fics that people seemed to like though...)

But I LOVE Penson. So I'll try to give it a try once this most-evil-and-long-project-that-ever-existed-in-the-history-of-schools is over!

Wish me lots of luck and Hanson covered in chocolate!

[fenlings]

Wheee I love hurt/comfortsex!

(But I think you might have meant "chapped" instead of "crapped" because um...)