21 Jump Street (season 1), based around the final episode of the first season, Mean Streets and Pastel Houses; Doug Penhall/Tom Hanson, R. feedback is nice.
You make me so happy! I love your fics. I especially love this one, and now I need to watch Mean Streets again with breaks to read the bits you wrote at appropriate moments. *beam*
Very much glove for this:):):):):):):):):):) I do not give helpful feedback, no. I give smilies, but I mean them most sincerely:):):):):):):):):):):):):):) I like the style and I like the story and I dance you for being yayful and writing the pretty punk policeman angstiness:) ::dances::
But um yes. By accident. It was the only one in the case. It didn't occur to me that they would have Season One and not Two. Anyways, I shall not watch it until I have acquired and viewed Season One. *pokes wandastruckstop viciously* She's supposed to give it to me as a late birthday gift, since she never got me one in the first place.
OMG GAH. *lovelovelovelove* *lollieslollieslollieslollies* You worked this into the orginal story flawessly, it is fabulous, and dear god, I'm glad I didn't read this before I posted mine as I would have been very intimidated. As it is, I am merely vaguely embarrassed. *waves hand dismissively*
I'm not being very coherant, but oh yes, grate and so canon. And dougie! *proddles him* I especially liked the hair dye coming out. Oh, gay hair dye.
I'm only just catching up on fic now - this was great! So well written and fitted into the episode. And you get the little things about hanson and penhall just right :)
have a look like, at the very start of the jump_street_chapel community - claire linked to it in one of her early entries. I haven't linked it from the site because i don't really know the author. read it!
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thankyou. i'm glad you enjoyed it :))
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hee. i heart that episode a lot. the more i watch it, the more i love the punk kids. brian! omg.
this was actually *meant* to be from Tom's POV, but as soon as i sat down to write doug stuck his stupid fat head in again.
<3!
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And um wow. PINHOLE! TOM! PINHOLE AND TOM FUCKING IN THE BATHROOM OF A DINER!
Maybe I can offer coherent feedback when I have some sleep.
WHAHAHAHAHAHA. I BOUGHT IT BUT I ACCIDENTALLY BOUGHT SEASON 2.
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But um yes. By accident. It was the only one in the case. It didn't occur to me that they would have Season One and not Two. Anyways, I shall not watch it until I have acquired and viewed Season One. *pokes
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I'm not being very coherant, but oh yes, grate and so canon. And dougie! *proddles him* I especially liked the hair dye coming out. Oh, gay hair dye.
U RITE REAL GOOD MISSUS HOPE.
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also, doug. stupid woobies.
HARTHART
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*thumbs up*
I never really thought of Hanson and Brian. Maybe I should rewatch that episode.
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thanks for the feedback :) i'm always dying to know who's reading.
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