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puddingsmith ([personal profile] hope) wrote2005-04-15 04:00 pm

Fic: hebrus (21JS)

21 jump street (season 2); tom(/)doug; set immediately post-orpheus 3.3.

er, apologies for the random angst, just really needed to write something again and so scribbled this down. PS feedback is nice!


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[identity profile] madeitsimple.livejournal.com 2005-04-15 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
aaah! angst! lovely lovely lovely. was that helpful?

[identity profile] slemslempike.livejournal.com 2005-04-15 08:47 am (UTC)(link)
doug's soft voice the most real thing in the universe right now and tom wants to line his insides with it, fill him up until his flesh is taut, limbs outspread and stuffed like a scarecrow. he closes his eyes again.

This is my favourite line in the fic. One of the best things about having watched s2 (other than *having watched series 2*) is that now I can go back and read all the fic you and claireweasley wrote that I've been womanfully resisting so as not to get spoiled. Yay!

[identity profile] princessofg.livejournal.com 2005-04-15 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't really get into this story because it's not my fandom and so my feedback is useless, but I just want to say I'm so glad you're writing and I hope you got moved out of the old place okay and I'm thinking of u and I hope you are well.

*hugs*

[identity profile] jubilancy.livejournal.com 2005-04-15 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)

"hey," doug's mouth tilts up into a smile, his grip around tom's wrist like a handcuff. and, like it's the most obvious thing in the world; "i'm right here."


Oh, that hit me just right. Talk about a wonderful closing line.

[identity profile] azrielle-jones.livejournal.com 2005-04-16 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
What a wonderfully wrenching fic. Perfectly descriptive with every part. Even the dust =)

[identity profile] loose-your-dogs.livejournal.com 2005-05-03 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
lizzle's hed go bang