Fic: mawkish (Firefly/Serenity)

[hope]

mawkish \MOCK-ish\, adjective:
1. Sickly or excessively sentimental.
2. Insipid in taste; nauseous; disgusting.

"If anything happens to her, anything at all, I swear to you, I will get very choked up."

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Comments

so creepifyin'

[karabou.livejournal.com]

Oh my god, this is horrible! Not the writing or anything like that, of course, but just.. augh.. this is so awful. What a horrifying twist to that scene, and.. wow. You are brilliant.

(also, I find it pretty amusing that I was just done catching up on the other ones you wrote, and I clicked back to your journal's main page to make sure, and this was just suddenly here... bonus, hehe)

Re: so creepifyin'

[hope]

hee! thankyou.

and thankyou very much for your feedback on all of these other little snippets too - i'm glad you like them :)

Re: so creepifyin'

[karabou.livejournal.com]

You're welcome! I'm trying to be good and leave feedback. *g*

[ana-grrl.livejournal.com]

Oh, so good. In that terrible, sad, kind of way. I love how it's from Zoe's POV. And as I was reading it, and the images were in my head, they seemed to be in slow motion, unfolding in front of me like a nightmare. Very nicely done!

[hope]

thankyou. i'm glad it worked :)

[baylorsr.livejournal.com]

Ack! Too awful! Must look away!

[baylorsr.livejournal.com]

(but in a good way, of course)

[hope]

hee. woot. i'm ... glad.

[irradiatedsoup.livejournal.com]

Ouch.

[hope]

*is a nice dog*