marco polo

[hope]

found this random scribble on my desktop, written for adrienne2, I believe, when we were prompting eachother via IM this one time, months ago.

marco polo
Firefly (Serenity); Jayne, Simon, River. G.

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Comments

[ana-grrl.livejournal.com]

Ah, so sad. I sometimes like to think that they might come out of the whole Miranda debacle with a little more security, but it seems so much more likely that people would shun them.

And if even if people didn't even if they welcomed them as people who get stuff done, being a hero doesn't exactly necessarily translate to making a living. :(

[hope]

yeah. there's a reason stories fade to black once the deed is done. it strikes me that these guys, who aren't really cut out for heroics anyway, wouldn't come out exactly unscathed.

[rinalin.livejournal.com]

I agree with Ana, this whole concept saddens me, but it strike me as the reality they'd be facing. You wrote a lovely little window into that. I *heart* you.

[hope]

thankyou!

but you know, at least they still have eachother. most of eachother. *mashes them all together*

[oceloty.livejournal.com]

Wow, this was insightful and melancholy. A nice little piece.

But ... does this mean Simon already sold his vests? Or does he get a big drama queen moment: "You can sell my books, you can sell my medical equipment, but NOBODY TOUCHES THE CLOTHES!"

[hope]

thanks for the feedback.

and, snerk!

take my books, take my equipment... you can't take this vest from me.

etc.

*whistles out of tune*

:D