[identity profile] danachan.livejournal.com 2002-11-16 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
This one just makes me all shivery and incoherent. yum. *mrr*

[identity profile] trianne.livejournal.com 2002-11-17 12:47 am (UTC)(link)
oh Gawd

I adore Elijah's britishisms - they are so damned cute! Ridiculously so, in fact.

Oh, I would like to read more of this. Is there more, Hope dearest one? Maybe just a teensy bit more?

I do admire the effortless way in which you switch from LOTR F/S to M/P to F/A to RPS. Adore you.

Hope the dying embers of your birthday are as nice as the first glow.

Tri

[identity profile] hjartad.livejournal.com 2002-12-01 09:09 am (UTC)(link)
It's short, it' s brilliant and I'm blown away. You use words so beautifully and I am SO very envious of that.

:) It was lovely!

[identity profile] ficlicious.livejournal.com 2003-01-20 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
yes. you have a great command of language - the way you choose words comes across as very in control. i mean that, well, the way the story flows...it is so total and the atmosphere so maleable that it just becomes all the more incredible.

anyway. loved it.