Can't wait to read the rest! It's very funny.
awww bless! that was wicked *g*
i adore the fact that elijah is the devil...(ish)
mmm billykilt!angel.
very cool.
i adore the fact that elijah is the devil...(ish)
mmm billykilt!angel.
very cool.
AHAHAHA.
I moseyed on in here from a rec from someone's journal. This is quite the creative stroke of genius. I certainly hope my dreams are inspired tonight.
*toddles off to bed with images of Devil!Elijah and Angel!Billy*
I moseyed on in here from a rec from someone's journal. This is quite the creative stroke of genius. I certainly hope my dreams are inspired tonight.
*toddles off to bed with images of Devil!Elijah and Angel!Billy*
Oh good God.
Elijah was picking his teeth - not pointed, Dom was relieved to notice - with a stumpy excuse for a fingernail. That, er, grew into a claw as he watched. Elijah lowered his hand, licked his lips.
I'm going to have that mental picture in my head all day. Elijah, with a claw.
"You're a trainee angel?!"
I feel bad for Dom already (or would, if I wasn't too busy lauging my ass off).
"Twenty-seven years and no achievements to speak of," Elijah mumbled around a mouthful of deep fried potato. "Not much for us to mess up, is there?"
I'll say it again. Oh good god. That alone is a promise that you're going to continue this. Right? Right?
Other than that... I love your characterization. Your text is full of details that make the characters come alive to me. (Like that claw thing.) Those same details make this a fun ride. Incredible. I've never really liked any TV sitcom, but this really works for me.
So now... Gimme more! *prod*
Elijah was picking his teeth - not pointed, Dom was relieved to notice - with a stumpy excuse for a fingernail. That, er, grew into a claw as he watched. Elijah lowered his hand, licked his lips.
I'm going to have that mental picture in my head all day. Elijah, with a claw.
"You're a trainee angel?!"
I feel bad for Dom already (or would, if I wasn't too busy lauging my ass off).
"Twenty-seven years and no achievements to speak of," Elijah mumbled around a mouthful of deep fried potato. "Not much for us to mess up, is there?"
I'll say it again. Oh good god. That alone is a promise that you're going to continue this. Right? Right?
Other than that... I love your characterization. Your text is full of details that make the characters come alive to me. (Like that claw thing.) Those same details make this a fun ride. Incredible. I've never really liked any TV sitcom, but this really works for me.
So now... Gimme more! *prod*
This is so friggin awesome. Just what I needed to wake up with :D Brilliant writing!
Dude, I'm a little late to the party, but this is great fun. Good job (and more please? Pretty please?)
He missed Oprah. She'd know what was going on.
Heck yea she would!! =)
Yeah, um, this is extremely funny. I think that if I read more of this, I might pee my pants from laughter. [more please!!] XD
Heck yea she would!! =)
Yeah, um, this is extremely funny. I think that if I read more of this, I might pee my pants from laughter. [more please!!] XD
Oh. My. God. How did I miss this!!!!????!!!! It's hysterical! Well done, my dear. Well done. *snort* *funniest thing I've read in ages*
*gigglesnort*
best thing since sliced lembas.
best thing since sliced lembas.
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