Wow. That was beautiful. I loved the style you did this in, the thoughts added onto the end and so essential. This is a snapshot of the moment things start to change. You can feel it looming in the near future and haunting Casey's mind.
I'm sure I don't have to tell you how much skill and talent you have with images, the look and style and shape of things - you already know that your visual sense is extremely strong. So instead I'll comment on how human and real and awkward and adolescent you make these characters, how true and unsure they feel to the reader.
Or I could just, uh, say Huzzah! and admit I suck at feedback.
Oh, this is gorgeous. I love how the first line just absolutely draws you in, and I *adore* the part about the photos. You've got such great narrative, and this is so wonderful!
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Beautiful.
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Or I could just, uh, say Huzzah! and admit I suck at feedback.
i'm disinclined to acquiesce to your request.
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