[identity profile] laurenmitchell.livejournal.com 2003-12-18 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
You're such a beautiful writer it kills me.

[identity profile] newtypeshadow.livejournal.com 2004-03-02 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
the white-gold burn of the rising sun flickering through suburban trees

ooh, such pretty words--and not just those, by a long shot. you've described the general road trip mood perfectly.

the sun unavoidably dashing itself against Casey's face it settles
should 'it' be there?

anyways, new memory. ^_^