Porca madonna. You write the best porn. You always get the setting right (oh, the "underwater" lighting is brill) and have the freshest language and the most lingering detail. You're so patient with the rhythm of it here without losing the sense of urgency -- much like Jack himself. That comes through beautifully. And the dynamic is so, so plausible and hot. (What was that we were saying yesterday about switching it around?) There are a half-dozen canon moments that could be the points of departure for this.

This is also a stupendous pendant to "Secretary," one of my all-time fave PWPs, both in theme and dynamic. If anything, it's even hotter. Thank you for starting my day with this!