hope | Fic: Underwood (Torchwood, Jack/Ianto, NC-17)

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Fic: Underwood (Torchwood, Jack/Ianto, NC-17)

Title: Underwood
Author: Hope (angstslashhope@LJ, hope@Dth)
Fandom: Torchwood
Wordcount: ~6,400
Genre: Desk porn, PWP
Rating: NC-17
Characters(s): Jack/Ianto
Notes: Massive thanks to

james and

rexluscus for beta help. (Also, whoa, I started writing this 5 months ago. O.O)

Summary: Pornography and paperwork.

Read on the AO3.

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Wow.

you do have a thing for chair!fic, don't you?! iirc, you've written more of that business?

i love the sphinx image, and i really liked that the barebacking was pre-negotiated (it actually squicks me more and more these days when it's all unsafe sex all the time for no particular reason).

Yeah, I have written it before - though the only one that comes to mind is the secretary kink story, which this is kind of a partner for anyway!

Jack and Ianto seem the sort (with the sort of relationship) where they'd be forthright over whether/when they'd bareback. In my personal canon, anyway :)

Thank you! <3

Porca madonna. You write the best porn. You always get the setting right (oh, the "underwater" lighting is brill) and have the freshest language and the most lingering detail. You're so patient with the rhythm of it here without losing the sense of urgency -- much like Jack himself. That comes through beautifully. And the dynamic is so, so plausible and hot. (What was that we were saying yesterday about switching it around?) There are a half-dozen canon moments that could be the points of departure for this.

This is also a stupendous pendant to "Secretary," one of my all-time fave PWPs, both in theme and dynamic. If anything, it's even hotter. Thank you for starting my day with this!

Thank you so much :)

I always worry when I get into PWPs that I'm losing pacing and getting mired in too much description, but I am getting much better at putting in the hard work to tighten all that up. I'm so glad it's coming through :D

And yay, I kind of saw it in the same sort of 'verse as The Secretary, too! Well, it's the same sort of story, really.

Cheers!

Oh crap, babe, really, you have to be careful, or you're gonna put us all out of a job.

Love it. PAPERWORK.

Hah! Yes, paperwork is SURPRISINGLY UNDER-UTILISED in this fandom, IMHO.

I'm glad you liked it. Yay!

Thank you :)

You paint a whole world in a fuck and turn the saturation all the way up. There's always a point, reading your stuff, at which my jaw just DROPS and doesn't come back to me before the end (did she just do that? she just did that. why hasn't anyone else done th--AND WOAH). I've never been so rapt reading a PWP. Yours shouldn't be called PWPs anyway. You make a very solid plot out of a sex scene.

omg, yay. Thank you for pointing out all the stuff I had really wanted to nail :D PWPs are SUCH HARD WORK omg, by the end of this run I was swearing to write gen for the next 6 months.

Woot! THANKS :D

damn. this is gorgeous. rich and luscious and beautiful and fucking hot as hell. I adore the pacing the most I think, how slow and tight it all is, focused on all the details of sight and smell and touch without ever losing focus. Amazing work.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) :)

Fucking amazing. Sorry I can't be more eloquent - pretty sure my brain just exploded.

Eloquence is not a requirement ;D

Glad you liked it - thank you!

This is gorgeous. It really made me think of that poster for The Secretary, with Maggie Gyllenhall on the desk and James Spader standing behind her. I love the way you get Jack's POV, which I think can never be easy, he is quite slippery. I love that he was sitting looking at 20's porn photos, something really delicious in that image.

Yeah, there is sexiness in the mundane. and vice versa :D

Thank you!! :)

Bloody incredible. So rich with details that made it erotic and sensuous rather than just fucking. Beautiful.

Thank you very much :)

OH MY GOOD GRIEF! that was soo bloody hot I have no words *thud*

Hee! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks :D

Wow! feels like the temperature in my office just climbed ten degrees...
This was freaking amazing! Smut brilliantly done.
*takes early lunch*

Hahah! Thank you. I'm glad you liked it :)

om ... G. This redefines 'graphic'. I mean that in the best way - it's not just that it's sexually graphic, but that the detail is so lovingly etched, so sensual, it's almost pictorial - even sculptural. Which of course multiplies the hotness factor by about, oh, a bazillion. Whew.

Aww, thank you! I'm really glad it all worked :D

Guh. Damn. Wow.

This was scorchingly hot! Thank you so much for writing and sharing it. I'll be in my bunk!

Hee! Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you :)

Amazing work. *in awe*

*beams* Thanks!!

This is amazing! Original and interesting and lovely. Yay!

Yay indeed! Thank you!

Damn, that was beyond hot. I love the set-up and the execution. Delicious.

Thanks very much :)

Holy cow. You've just left me breathless.

I'm glad to hear it :D

Thank you!

Great job. Yowza.

Thank you :)

Brilliant! *fans self*

:D Thank you!

I adore the way you get into Jack's POV and how much he appreciates, and anticipates, the way Ianto's mind works. The brain really IS the biggest sex organ. Gorgeous physical details that are really pretty rare to find.

Also, guh!

Yay, I'm so glad it all worked. Thanks for reading :D

Oh. My. God. I'll be in my bunk.
Stunning
Gxxx

:D Thank you!!

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Holy smokes.

The lights of the computer screens paint the Hub's tiled walls a watery, undulating blue, which always makes Jack feel like he's tucked away in the corner of a grotto. The green of his desk lamp seems almost like sea flora, and the TARDIS coral has never looked more at home.

Beautiful description, and the the rimming and the hot porn-fu. IS LOVE.

I really like the way Jack imagines Ianto's expression when he can't see his face, and sex with clothes still on? So my kink. Loved this.

*beams* yay porn! yay kinks!

TYVM! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D :D

Oh..my.. All the pornilicious details are super hot. And both of them being bound by the clothes, but not..that's just too hot for words. Gahh...

Hee. Glad you liked it :D Thank you!

Your porn blows me (haha!) away every time.

This is scorching. I love every word in this story. The kink, the tenderness, the annoyance and the position!
Everything is yummy.

I love that they keep their clothes on - they're both got a huge kink for it and the descriptions of heat and sweat.

Yeah, my bunk beckons!

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it :)

Oh... just wonderful. So much character and so much going on. This is porn with brains and I LOVE it.

:D Woot. Porn has certainly eaten *my* brain.

Thanks!!

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