You paint a whole world in a fuck and turn the saturation all the way up. There's always a point, reading your stuff, at which my jaw just DROPS and doesn't come back to me before the end (did she just do that? she just did that. why hasn't anyone else done th--AND WOAH). I've never been so rapt reading a PWP. Yours shouldn't be called PWPs anyway. You make a very solid plot out of a sex scene.