Beta readers around the world agree, this totally didn't fit in at the end of the story (where I had tacked it on after a couple more beers). But I love Lucy, so the world still gets to see it.

So, this is an outtake from Smokin' cigarettes and watchin' Captain Kangaroo. Jack + Lucy, about 1000 words, chronologically occurring after the end of the story. Warning: run-on sentences, cussing, siblings, queering of characters.

Totally not beta read or nothing. That's why it's not going on the website, just here.

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I think I like this bit better than I like the whole of the actual story. Surely that can't be right... *g*