more haiku

[hope]

I know these are one of those things that aren't that exciting unless they're actually YOURS, but I'm utterly delighted by some of the haiku that generator comes up with. So I'm going to record them here so I can come back to them myself.

Feel free to scroll on past the cut tag :) I've included my favourites from the previous post, too. I am quite touched by some of the hopeful_fiction ones. These things are CLEVERer than me.



hopeful_fiction:

war war did something
to me and jesus their come
infuses the room john

can take him home from
a night on her breast she laughs
mostly in surprise

twisting and dodging
around the base of his spine
down his arms curling

trucks rush by him odd
shapes that blur in his vision
and then one stops bright

footing and logic
and sense of it all of him
fists clenched and face

bad things are going
to have sammy come and see
your dad wasn there no

back from the sharp pain
of it instead flattening
his hand against john

his back and john hooks
a finger into the back
yard sammy misses dean

her husband helps her
undress slip into the loose
gown ninety minutes

pressing as if in
relief he presses sammy to
him like dean always

but nothing he can
do about it sammy small
body splayed loosely

in the twenties wrote
some devil's diaries or something
got himself a smirk

onto the loose flap
of john breast pocket twisting
and swinging his legs

she sounds surprised
changed plenty in the night
john wakes abruptly

of dark billowing
smoke on the rear window there
movement hands numb still


angstslashhope

as mirrors to see
what the hell are my boys it
takes a step back eyes

scrub dean moaning car
fuck man my car they come
out of the car dean

same story there's
a warm solid nudge to the
back of his jeans slouch

of sam knees when he
tries to un recede toward
the stables this morning

clothed in the edge
of the door with shaking hands
dean john says softly

daddy knows best and
the fact that they rented places
here and here i mean

i re read it it
kinda works better if you
filled out the drafts

deal with the thought of
some cowboy saddling them up
and add your own yay

to convince me what
we're doing here at all times
the winchesters were

Comments

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deal with the thought of
some cowboy saddling them up
and add your own yay


*laugh*