OMG, I love this idea. It is SO cool. And you write it so that it actually sounds plausible! The details, like the explanation about being a surgeon, they really help to pull it all together. The voices are very good, the flow is excellent, and it's touching. And also creepy as hell.

Simon is mine. Thas all that matters.

This bit, the ending of her explanation, it creeps me right out. I started off thinking, oh, it's so touching, and ended up thinking YIKES!

The last line is perfect, and I can imagine exactly the tone of his voice and the expression on his face.