[identity profile] galindaxxxx.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! I just came across this, and let me say, WOW! It was so amazingly believeable -- and I loved Simon 'waking up' and saying River's name at the end, it gave the whole piece a very eerie, Tam-like feeling. Keep up the great work!