I read this AAAAAAAAGES ago and just skulked, thought it was great and said nothing :-/
I've just read it again. And your characterisation is perfect, as usual, at the risk of sounding repetitive, and your writing is beautiful, and their post-Serenity pain ("To bury 'em there" gahhhh) is so very sad. And this whole paragraph: '“You ain’t right,” Jayne says...' is so terribly hot. Mmmhmm.
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I've just read it again. And your characterisation is perfect, as usual, at the risk of sounding repetitive, and your writing is beautiful, and their post-Serenity pain ("To bury 'em there" gahhhh) is so very sad. And this whole paragraph: '“You ain’t right,” Jayne says...' is so terribly hot. Mmmhmm.
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thankyou for the lovely feedback... this story was tricky to write, but it turns out people kinda like it!
I think there should be more immediately-after-Serenity fic.