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The D Word (2/2)
Supernatural/The L Word; genderswap; NC-17 (femslash); Dean/OFC, Dean/Shane.
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Holy fuck.
Omg, this was awesome! Firstly? So totally worked! I loved your characterisation of Dean as a girl - he's still Dean, which works lovely. Everything made sense and worked out beautifully. Secondly: I enjoyed the slashy, incesty brotherly vibes, too. I just wished there were more ;-) But it was damn fun the way Dean was driving Sam insane. Thirdly: How damn HOT was this? That scene with Shane and Dean in the bathroom stall? Omg. Omg. Omg.
Best femslash, ever. I loved it.
Omg, this was awesome! Firstly? So totally worked! I loved your characterisation of Dean as a girl - he's still Dean, which works lovely. Everything made sense and worked out beautifully. Secondly: I enjoyed the slashy, incesty brotherly vibes, too. I just wished there were more ;-) But it was damn fun the way Dean was driving Sam insane. Thirdly: How damn HOT was this? That scene with Shane and Dean in the bathroom stall? Omg. Omg. Omg.
Best femslash, ever. I loved it.
Oh holy shit, this is the best thing ever.
I have such mixed feelings about the L-word even though I want to do Shane up against a tree (okay, who am I kidding? she could domme the hell out of me). But Dean and Shane... having LESBIAN SEX.
gush!
I have such mixed feelings about the L-word even though I want to do Shane up against a tree (okay, who am I kidding? she could domme the hell out of me). But Dean and Shane... having LESBIAN SEX.
gush!
This is way too much fun and it's adorable and Dean is just...It's nice to know some things never change, So I just enjoyed the ride and was having all kind of delightful girl on girl fun vicariously and then I got here:
“Another kid running around with our blood, Dean. Winchester blood.” Sam’s looking straight at him, now, not fidgeting, mouth a firm line. Not puppy-dog eyes, but still freaking clutching at Dean’s chest. And oh.
“Oh.”
“Yeah.” Sam breaks eye contact, looks down, away; anywhere but Dean.
Not that this is unfamiliar territory. Because as soon as Sam was old enough to think for himself, to question the whys and hows of Dad’s decisions, he’d done just that.
It’s just that Dean didn’t realize ‘til now what that means. That Sam would get this fucking upset over the thought of bringing one of them into the world, into their world. And fuck, that Sam has the belief that no matter who raised the kid, the fact that it was his would be enough to seal its fate.
And I just...broke. You broke me. And Dean broke me, because as much fun as he's having, he is not stupid and he is never unconcerned for Sam's welfare, and that just took this from a fun, fluffy, very hot and enjoyable bit of fiction to something a whole lot richer and deeper for me. And I thank you for it.
I think your user name is particularly apropos in this case [g].
“Another kid running around with our blood, Dean. Winchester blood.” Sam’s looking straight at him, now, not fidgeting, mouth a firm line. Not puppy-dog eyes, but still freaking clutching at Dean’s chest. And oh.
“Oh.”
“Yeah.” Sam breaks eye contact, looks down, away; anywhere but Dean.
Not that this is unfamiliar territory. Because as soon as Sam was old enough to think for himself, to question the whys and hows of Dad’s decisions, he’d done just that.
It’s just that Dean didn’t realize ‘til now what that means. That Sam would get this fucking upset over the thought of bringing one of them into the world, into their world. And fuck, that Sam has the belief that no matter who raised the kid, the fact that it was his would be enough to seal its fate.
And I just...broke. You broke me. And Dean broke me, because as much fun as he's having, he is not stupid and he is never unconcerned for Sam's welfare, and that just took this from a fun, fluffy, very hot and enjoyable bit of fiction to something a whole lot richer and deeper for me. And I thank you for it.
I think your user name is particularly apropos in this case [g].
Yay! Thank God someone wrote genderfuck that makes sense, jesus.
And guh, fucking right. Shane. omfg, yes.
Lovely, hot story. Solid plot, solid characterization. And you know femslash is good when I get halfway through a particularly hot scene and have to wonder, shit, why am I not a lesbian again?
Because yeah, guh.
And guh, fucking right. Shane. omfg, yes.
Lovely, hot story. Solid plot, solid characterization. And you know femslash is good when I get halfway through a particularly hot scene and have to wonder, shit, why am I not a lesbian again?
Because yeah, guh.
I can't tell you how glad I am that you like this, that it all worked for you :D
At a few points I was a little worried about the Dean characterisation, because I felt like I wasn't spending enough time on *him*, but in the end it was, yeah. Why do I need to spend all that time characterising him, when he's just the same, only with boobs?
I enjoyed making the incest all subtexty, too, but was pretty set on Dean being a big fat dyke in this story. One day I will actually write honest-to-god Wincest, I swear it.
THANK YOU.
At a few points I was a little worried about the Dean characterisation, because I felt like I wasn't spending enough time on *him*, but in the end it was, yeah. Why do I need to spend all that time characterising him, when he's just the same, only with boobs?
I enjoyed making the incest all subtexty, too, but was pretty set on Dean being a big fat dyke in this story. One day I will actually write honest-to-god Wincest, I swear it.
THANK YOU.
I kinda have mixed feelings about The L Word. Or at least, ideologically I feel like it needs challenging at points, but when I'm actually watching it all I want is for Marina to top me into oblivion.
But Dean and Shane... having LESBIAN SEX.
Yeah, that was pretty much the premise and motivation for the entire story :D
HEART. thanks for the feedback. I'm real glad you like it :D
But Dean and Shane... having LESBIAN SEX.
Yeah, that was pretty much the premise and motivation for the entire story :D
HEART. thanks for the feedback. I'm real glad you like it :D
...It's all fun and games until someone loses jurisdiction over their genetic code.
Yeah, it seems I'm unable to make a fic in this fandom (or come to think of it... any fandom) completely light-hearted, have to have some angst in there somewhere (username... yeah. hee). I'm really glad that worked for you.
And thanks for the complements on Dean! It's nice to know some things never change was pretty much the basis for my characterisation :D
Thank YOU for the feedback :)
Yeah, it seems I'm unable to make a fic in this fandom (or come to think of it... any fandom) completely light-hearted, have to have some angst in there somewhere (username... yeah. hee). I'm really glad that worked for you.
And thanks for the complements on Dean! It's nice to know some things never change was pretty much the basis for my characterisation :D
Thank YOU for the feedback :)
Thank God someone wrote genderfuck that makes sense, jesus.
hee! There are a whole bunch of genderswap stories in this fandom that I absolutely love, but when it comes down to the Dean and Sam in my head, the genderswap is just a change of parts, not brains. But yeah, as long as the characterisation works story-by-story... I'm generally overwhelmingly happy with this fandom's cracked out ideas.
Thank you for the awesome feedback. I don't think I've ever got a better complement than "that sex scene made me question my heterosexuality" :D
:D
hee! There are a whole bunch of genderswap stories in this fandom that I absolutely love, but when it comes down to the Dean and Sam in my head, the genderswap is just a change of parts, not brains. But yeah, as long as the characterisation works story-by-story... I'm generally overwhelmingly happy with this fandom's cracked out ideas.
Thank you for the awesome feedback. I don't think I've ever got a better complement than "that sex scene made me question my heterosexuality" :D
:D
This is an excellent story. It pulls off every trick it tries, it's incredibly funny, it's illegally hot (I think Dean would VERY MUCH APPROVE of the outrageously awesome lesbian sex you bestowed upon him), and it's really, really fun. You give great Supernatural, and you're pretty damn talented at The L Word, too, and this story is the sum of both those parts and then some. GO YOU! \o/
i should start off by saying that i'm not really a fan of the genderswap. i'm disinclined to read them just because they don't generally connect with me but all that said, i'm a slut for shane and a slut for dean so, i mean. i couldn't help but check it out.
and i'm really glad i did. this is very well done, and you have nailed so well the rhythms between dean and sam, that sibling banter that doesn't change because a dick mysteriously goes missing. and dean as a girl worked really well for me, too. flipping it over, yeah, shane's perfect, and the bette/tina seduction had me laughing out loud it was so fabulous.
i won't c/p the text, but esp the bit where sam talks about his fear of bringing another kid into the world, that especially struck me as being spot on and something no one really thinks about but i bet he obsesses over.
i'm not entirely sure this is coherent, but it's ass o'clock in the morning and i haven't had any coffee. great job at both worlds, and at bringing them together.
and i'm really glad i did. this is very well done, and you have nailed so well the rhythms between dean and sam, that sibling banter that doesn't change because a dick mysteriously goes missing. and dean as a girl worked really well for me, too. flipping it over, yeah, shane's perfect, and the bette/tina seduction had me laughing out loud it was so fabulous.
i won't c/p the text, but esp the bit where sam talks about his fear of bringing another kid into the world, that especially struck me as being spot on and something no one really thinks about but i bet he obsesses over.
i'm not entirely sure this is coherent, but it's ass o'clock in the morning and i haven't had any coffee. great job at both worlds, and at bringing them together.
So, I was impatient reading your girl!dean because, WELL, OF COURSE, but man, I did not know you'd make it a Shane/Den Xover pairing an dOH MY GOD it is like christmas, a wish I didn't know i had so completely coming true, dfjbgsdfbdfgndHOTNESStimes1000.
So, thank yo, a million times thanks for the brilliance and the top characterisation and the, yeah, omg, yes.
This said? I think it could benefit from a beta - there's a few typos and tenses things and stuff tha I'd have underlined, like.
(you're not gonna hate me for saying so, yeah? I mean, I totally love it and everything!)
*bookmarks 5 times!*
So, thank yo, a million times thanks for the brilliance and the top characterisation and the, yeah, omg, yes.
This said? I think it could benefit from a beta - there's a few typos and tenses things and stuff tha I'd have underlined, like.
(you're not gonna hate me for saying so, yeah? I mean, I totally love it and everything!)
*bookmarks 5 times!*
I think it could benefit from a beta - there's a few typos and tenses things and stuff tha I'd have underlined, like.
totally not hating you for saying that... to be honest, I place most of the blame of my lack-of-beta-reader on my impatience to post a story as soon as I've written it! But also, I totally re-drafted this myself a couple days after I finished it... at about 2am, heh. In other words, yeah, I do need a beta; but usually beta it myself. I'm not suprised this one came out rough-cut, I'm sure my attention to detail flagged due to the length.
(also, liek, I *did* consider getting a beta reader for this one... but I don't have anyone already for SPN fic, and from past experience, putting out a 'who wants to beta this?' call results in a bunch of people going 'omg ME!' and then reading and just saying 'yep, looks fine!' - i.e. I've felt, in the past, that I could do a better job myself.)
but yeah. obviously not picking up on everything, though I have a tendency to post immediately, then re-read it in bits and pieces in weeks following and edit things when I see them. not entirely efficient, but yeah.
Wow, that was longer than necessary. Hi.
All that said, I'm glad you liked it :D Shane/Dean omgOTP.
totally not hating you for saying that... to be honest, I place most of the blame of my lack-of-beta-reader on my impatience to post a story as soon as I've written it! But also, I totally re-drafted this myself a couple days after I finished it... at about 2am, heh. In other words, yeah, I do need a beta; but usually beta it myself. I'm not suprised this one came out rough-cut, I'm sure my attention to detail flagged due to the length.
(also, liek, I *did* consider getting a beta reader for this one... but I don't have anyone already for SPN fic, and from past experience, putting out a 'who wants to beta this?' call results in a bunch of people going 'omg ME!' and then reading and just saying 'yep, looks fine!' - i.e. I've felt, in the past, that I could do a better job myself.)
but yeah. obviously not picking up on everything, though I have a tendency to post immediately, then re-read it in bits and pieces in weeks following and edit things when I see them. not entirely efficient, but yeah.
Wow, that was longer than necessary. Hi.
All that said, I'm glad you liked it :D Shane/Dean omgOTP.
Hee! I'm glad you like it, especially if you're not usually a genderswap fan... so, thank you doubly!
Thanks for picking out bits that I was keen to have working properly, too :)
And for leaving feedback! It certainly is coherent enough to leave me happy. Hope you got that coffee :D
Thanks for picking out bits that I was keen to have working properly, too :)
And for leaving feedback! It certainly is coherent enough to leave me happy. Hope you got that coffee :D
I think this pairing's cutesy name is SHADY. And I want to see them have manly fights over, huh. stuff! And make up sex. LOTS OF IT.
Shane/Dean 4evah!11
Shane/Dean 4evah!11
Holy fuck! I am not the biggest fan of genderswap fics, but Dean and Shane? Oh my gods.... My favorite! Attitude and everything! They're a perfect match! And the sex between them?? Shiiit, I think my brain melted out my panties!
hahaha, yeah, it sounds like "you give good head" or something ;-) *ggg*
whoa, hot.
And I'm not exactly an L Word fan, I am a crossover fan, and it's a very worthy creation because it gives fandom Shane. The day someone writes a Shane/Faith fic, I'll never need smut again, because the memory of that image will keep me warm forever.
And I'd been craving Dean/Faith fic, and, possibly due to his maleness and the no-way-would-Shane-go-for-a-him, never ever considered Dean/Shane. But this takes all the hot things I want (well, other than Faith, but you can't have everything), and puts them together in ways I never knew I always wanted.
And I found the image of Bette&Tina seducing Sam a little too plausible, & even without the Wincester curse issues but oh-so-much more so with them, inherently creepy.
And I'm not exactly an L Word fan, I am a crossover fan, and it's a very worthy creation because it gives fandom Shane. The day someone writes a Shane/Faith fic, I'll never need smut again, because the memory of that image will keep me warm forever.
And I'd been craving Dean/Faith fic, and, possibly due to his maleness and the no-way-would-Shane-go-for-a-him, never ever considered Dean/Shane. But this takes all the hot things I want (well, other than Faith, but you can't have everything), and puts them together in ways I never knew I always wanted.
And I found the image of Bette&Tina seducing Sam a little too plausible, & even without the Wincester curse issues but oh-so-much more so with them, inherently creepy.
So, I'm gathering you like... Faith? Hee. I have seen stacks (well, at least a few) of Faith/Winchesters crossover fics, I'm hoping you've come across them too!
Yes, I am a big fan of the crossover also (obviously).
Thanks for the feedback! It did end up that the things I started playing for laughs came out somewhat serious. Well, understandably so, I guess.
Glad you liked it :)
Yes, I am a big fan of the crossover also (obviously).
Thanks for the feedback! It did end up that the things I started playing for laughs came out somewhat serious. Well, understandably so, I guess.
Glad you liked it :)
Oh. Oh my.
I think I need a moment.
In my pants.
Just. Okay, your Dean was phenomenal; absolutely spot on and wisecracky and rolling with the punches and very, very interested in girlsex, which, yes. And, while I don't watch The L Word, I've had a massive girlcrush on Kathryn Moennig since grade ten (OMG aeons ago) so my brain did all the requisite filling-in and. Oh. Whew. There are words to describe what that did to me, but a lady never tells, and all that.
I am going to memory this, oh ho ho yes I am.
I think I need a moment.
In my pants.
Just. Okay, your Dean was phenomenal; absolutely spot on and wisecracky and rolling with the punches and very, very interested in girlsex, which, yes. And, while I don't watch The L Word, I've had a massive girlcrush on Kathryn Moennig since grade ten (OMG aeons ago) so my brain did all the requisite filling-in and. Oh. Whew. There are words to describe what that did to me, but a lady never tells, and all that.
I am going to memory this, oh ho ho yes I am.
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