So, I was impatient reading your girl!dean because, WELL, OF COURSE, but man, I did not know you'd make it a Shane/Den Xover pairing an dOH MY GOD it is like christmas, a wish I didn't know i had so completely coming true, dfjbgsdfbdfgndHOTNESStimes1000.
So, thank yo, a million times thanks for the brilliance and the top characterisation and the, yeah, omg, yes.
This said? I think it could benefit from a beta - there's a few typos and tenses things and stuff tha I'd have underlined, like.
(you're not gonna hate me for saying so, yeah? I mean, I totally love it and everything!)
I think it could benefit from a beta - there's a few typos and tenses things and stuff tha I'd have underlined, like.
totally not hating you for saying that... to be honest, I place most of the blame of my lack-of-beta-reader on my impatience to post a story as soon as I've written it! But also, I totally re-drafted this myself a couple days after I finished it... at about 2am, heh. In other words, yeah, I do need a beta; but usually beta it myself. I'm not suprised this one came out rough-cut, I'm sure my attention to detail flagged due to the length.
(also, liek, I *did* consider getting a beta reader for this one... but I don't have anyone already for SPN fic, and from past experience, putting out a 'who wants to beta this?' call results in a bunch of people going 'omg ME!' and then reading and just saying 'yep, looks fine!' - i.e. I've felt, in the past, that I could do a better job myself.)
but yeah. obviously not picking up on everything, though I have a tendency to post immediately, then re-read it in bits and pieces in weeks following and edit things when I see them. not entirely efficient, but yeah.
Wow, that was longer than necessary. Hi.
All that said, I'm glad you liked it :D Shane/Dean omgOTP.
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So, thank yo, a million times thanks for the brilliance and the top characterisation and the, yeah, omg, yes.
This said? I think it could benefit from a beta - there's a few typos and tenses things and stuff tha I'd have underlined, like.
(you're not gonna hate me for saying so, yeah? I mean, I totally love it and everything!)
*bookmarks 5 times!*
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totally not hating you for saying that... to be honest, I place most of the blame of my lack-of-beta-reader on my impatience to post a story as soon as I've written it! But also, I totally re-drafted this myself a couple days after I finished it... at about 2am, heh. In other words, yeah, I do need a beta; but usually beta it myself. I'm not suprised this one came out rough-cut, I'm sure my attention to detail flagged due to the length.
(also, liek, I *did* consider getting a beta reader for this one... but I don't have anyone already for SPN fic, and from past experience, putting out a 'who wants to beta this?' call results in a bunch of people going 'omg ME!' and then reading and just saying 'yep, looks fine!' - i.e. I've felt, in the past, that I could do a better job myself.)
but yeah. obviously not picking up on everything, though I have a tendency to post immediately, then re-read it in bits and pieces in weeks following and edit things when I see them. not entirely efficient, but yeah.
Wow, that was longer than necessary. Hi.
All that said, I'm glad you liked it :D Shane/Dean omgOTP.
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Shane/Dean 4evah!11