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puddingsmith ([personal profile] hope) wrote2006-09-16 11:55 am

Prelude

Supernatural, John/Dean, PWP, rated R. Custom-made for [livejournal.com profile] derryderrydown.


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[identity profile] teffy.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
The hottness of this has melted my brain. O_O And my panties.

Guuuuhhhh.

[identity profile] nixwilliams.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
it still squicks me to high heaven, but i love the textures, the little details (the shirt cuffs, the fly zip). and you win with the power dynamic, as per your john/dean meat/meta. and anyway, i'm willing to submit myself to a squicking from a good fic. i am the beta to your john/dean alpha.

top job, you!!!

[identity profile] nixwilliams.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
on obligations: i am and i will! because i be a crazy stalker-type.

and seriously, i knew what it was going to be, so i had the option not to look, yeah? re-reading my comment i realise it sounds a bit like *sigh* why you gotta make me read this shit, huh? but that's not how it was intended. didnae mean to rain on your fic. and i did like it.

anyway, i sort of enjoy being squicked. (unless it's hermione/snape)

/stalking

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sitting under a blast of AC and I feel sticky and humid now, from the intensity of the palpable detailing in this story. And I haven't even gotten to how hot the sex is, and it is indeed hot.

Wow. *fans self* *applauds you*
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[identity profile] phantomas.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG. I looked around and I was there, dead on the floor. Melted. In a puddle.

*fervently* thank you :D
love the details, the atmosphere, the increased tension, the suffocating small space, all the furniture providing obstacles and at the same time pushing them.
wow.
thanks :D

[identity profile] justaminuteaway.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
This was the first John/Dean fic I read and since I am still adjusting to the idea of Dean/Sam, there were some parts were I, ah, skimmed past because my brain was yelling at me. But y'know, it wasn't nearly as scary as I thought it would be. I kind of think I almost like it more than Dean/Sam. Plus, hey, you have a really fantastic writing style, which helped. I loved the details. I loved how it was written so simply, yet it had this great flow to it and all these hidden wonderful things in it.

[identity profile] dahemo.livejournal.com 2006-09-18 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Mm, nice. Your writing's so very detailed. I like it; it's different from anything I usually read.
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[personal profile] amalthia 2006-09-21 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
wow this was kind of hot.

[identity profile] gelasius.livejournal.com 2006-09-23 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. Oh, wow.

Being in this fandom is making me learn things about my own potential kinks, especially with writers like you. Which is all to the good. I adore the ending:

towelling efficiently, movement flowing from loose-liquid to poised, alert, ready.
"Yes, sir."


Grounding the hotness into something that is so utterly them - a moment between hunts. NICE.

[identity profile] dullemarulle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 03:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, this was incredibly hot. I'm still just trying out the John/Dean pairing, but this was one of the best pieces I've read. Daddy and John's hand of Dean's throat made me whimper a bit.
*is off to check out your other stuff*

[identity profile] downbythebay-4.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
Holy smokes.

Great departure from "damnyousontakeitlikeaman." Dean knows that if he doesn't get out of that shower John's coming in after him, doesn't he?

The vividness is wonderful.

[identity profile] thandie.livejournal.com 2009-06-26 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
You were recced over at [livejournal.com profile] sawedoff_recs ! :)