El Camino Real (The King's Highway)

[hope]

by angstslashhope
Supernatural. Dean/Sam, Dean/Sam/John, pre-series but no underage. PWP, NC-17. 6,500 words.
WARNING: dubious consent.

Once again, derryderrydown is entirely to blame for this. All thanks and accusations can be pointed in her direction.

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Comments

[derryderrydown.livejournal.com]

*feels all proud*

You are so easy to corrupt, it's fantastic. Especially when it's such wonderful, wonderful, totally hot corruption.

[hope]

Leaving me nice comments doesn't make you less evil.

[droolfangrrl.livejournal.com]

HAH! Brings to mind people who hose dogs or cats down.

[hope]

*snerk* indeed!!

[lcsbanana.livejournal.com]

SWEET MONKEY JESUS, WOMAN. i...i am gonna be late for class so um, yes, more later but--SAMMY. wow. I...STOP GIVING ME NEW KINKS.

[lcsbanana.livejournal.com]

no, seriously, fucking A, SAMMY. i seem to have become samsexual, in that anything/anyone he does is RIDICULOUSLY HOT, even when i have objections, which i BARELY did, because i have no morals and am fooling no one. but zomg. taht is just...with their HANDS and the two of them like, like feral cats almost, but still *there,* and and--;LDKAHP9GNQ;DJKSAHGDS;F;DKLSF YAYE.

[maygra.livejournal.com]

Only you.


Sheesh. I think my monitor burned out.

[hope]

Only me???? what's that supposed to mean?! ;D


I would offer to replace your monitor, but turnabout's fair play with the number of times you've slain me with your fic!!

Thank you for commenting :) :)

[hope]

It's part of my style/process of writing to attempt to make everything wind round and tangle into each other, so yes, it was mostly intentional ;)

the themes you choose to write are very, very close to my heart. Or.. psyche, or whatever the place is that holds all the special stuff.

because our brains/hearts/psyches work in the same way. Which makes me pleased. because then your fic makes me pleased, and vice versa :)

monks and ghosts and bels are all valid conversation choices in this case :D have you read rei_c's Fundamental Image series?

Thank you for the feedback!!

[brownbetty]

…my brain has sort of fizzled, and given up. You write these things that I have carefully reasoned out my resistance to, and then wham I can't even remember why.

[hope]

You write these things that I have carefully reasoned out my resistance to, and then wham I can't even remember why.

:D why would you reason them out of existence?? because, honestly. This is my attempt to reason them *into* existence :D

yay fizzling!! Thank you :) :)

[improperlydone.livejournal.com]

...

I... uh.

You've killed me. I wish I could be constructive. I wish I could leave feedback that is coherent, but you've just killed me.

This part in particular:

Sammy’s mouth tastes of copper-metal, of hot-clean wet, of Dean; and Dean pushes Sammy’s hand under the waistband of John’s jeans.

MURDERED me. All of it was hot, but when I read this, I had to step back from the smoking monitor for a while. Something about it being both of their hands. Damn...

[hope]

*beams* yay! I love it when I cause death-by-fic, it's my favourite response to a story EVER :D

It's coherent enough for me. Yay. Thank you!!

[phantomas.livejournal.com]

Oh WOMAN!

*flails around in a flailing way*

I need to breathe again, first, then to read again. And again. And again.
Reading this is a very tactile, very sensorial experience, thank you.

(of course, they just grumble that it's the curse and then won't ever talk about it again, I suppose. Dammit!)

I love so many lines and images I don't know which ones to choose.
Beautiful, hot (and I love that you had John knowing about Dean/Sam already, btw), gorgeous scene.

[hope]

(of course, they just grumble that it's the curse and then won't ever talk about it again, I suppose. Dammit!)

I dunno, I kinda like this 'verse. it fits into a larger one that Derry and I have been talking about for a while, so I'll quite possibly end up writing more in it :D

I'm glad you liked this. Heee! very glad. *has porn anxiety*

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

This was spectacular. And soooooooooooo gloriously dirty-wrong.

My brain is entirely melted.

[hope]

*beams*

*catches your brain in a small ornamental bucket*

:) Thank you!!

[aerwynblue.livejournal.com]

am i gonna go to hell 'cause i read this?
"No, Mother Superior, I only skimmed the first paragraph. I swear! Um, what are you going to do with that ruler?"
I think I need another Punkin Ale...and a shower.

[hope]

Well, if you do go to hell, there'll be a lot of us there keeping you company :D

[alznthlay.livejournal.com]

*thud*

I liked this...possibly loved it...and uhm...wow...er..hi?

[hope]

*gleeful cackle*

Hi!! :D

Thank you!!!

1:32 AM

[feldspar2.livejournal.com]

I should be asleep now, but I had to read this. Had to finish this, especially when I saw Sammy's role; there's so little John/Sam stuff out there...mygod, this was POW. A salty dream. It's like something melting inside me, like the ice in the bag. I need to read it again and again.

Thank you for an incredible bedtime story.

Re: 1:32 AM

[hope]

:) yay! I'm glad you liked it! It is difficult to wrangle a conceivable John/Sam scenario, so yay. I'm very happy this one worked for you!

:D

[neroli66.livejournal.com]

I think my brain broke, amazing story!

[hope]

Yaaay! brain breakage is my favourite :D

Thanks :) :)

[sparklinblossom.livejournal.com]

Must...breathe...must...*faints*

Seriously, OMG. Hot on so many freaking levels!

[hope]

:D I'm glad you liked it!!

Thanks for feedbacking :) :)

[palebluebell.livejournal.com]

Oh my.

I've nothing much more than that to offer, because you killed me dead with the hot and the sheer amount of wicked naughtiness going on in this story. Lovely.

[hope]

wicked naughtiness! I like!

I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you :D

[swivel-chair.livejournal.com]

Jesus woman, that was seriously the fucking hottest thing that I've ever read, ever. There will never be another fic which infused such emotion with such sex.

Unless of course, you write another fic.

Wonderful darling.

[hope]

*beams* Thank you!! that makes me very happy, hee. I am working on more fic. Hopefully with more sex, if I can wrangle it. Well, there will definitely be sex. Just depends if I can make it work or not. We'll see!

Anyway, ramble!

:) Thanks for feedbacking!!

[squee1123.livejournal.com]

i'll be honest...i only read up until John woke up tied up and then...I just couldnt do it. I dont know what it is about John eing part of the wincest but I just dont feel as okay reading it. maybe its the age difference.

ill probably come back and finish it some other time. til then though...the first part...very. nice.

[hope]

Thanks :) Don't read if you're not comfortable with it, of course not!

Thank you for commenting :)

[ruraleyes.livejournal.com]

This is so wonderful! Hot! Wrong! Everything I like in a fic! Plus your John is so him, "John shudders. Better this. Better this than another. Better them here, safe, than out there, under anyone else’s hands." He's such a martyr.

And Mean. "John twists on the cold faucet, and they wake up." He's a Mean Martyr. Thanks for a wonderful story.

[hope]

John is a Mean Matyr. Yeah. That about sums it up! :D

Thanks for the feedback!! I'm really glad you liked it :)

[swear-jar.livejournal.com]

AGDUa;u8syhad? ASHD;ahdihoasih!!! AJSHDuashduasdh!? Hoiah? LHAShoih! khsd!

... I'm sorry, I appear to have forgotten how to type. In the good way.

[hope]

*cackles in evil delight*

Clearly, you speak the sekrit language of OT3. Welcome to the fold.

(Yay! Thanks!!)

[amalthia]

oh wow this was just lush and hot and I loved it.

[hope]

Yay! Thank you! :)

[chasethecat.livejournal.com]

Oh my LORD, this was gorgeous and dirtyhot and just GUH.

[hope]

Yay! Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[jb_slasher]

Oh, holy crap. That was... HOT. I can't think of anything original to say. Your descriptions are wonderful, and the sex, oh WOW.

..

i sort of can't believe i just read that.

..

woah.

[hope]

heee! yay. Another kinda-convert *beams*

Thank you :D

[akm30.livejournal.com]

I would love to read more stories just like this one. It is hot. I love how they tied up the dad and basically had their way with him, but in such a tender and loving way. Please write more like this with John, Dean and Sam.

[hope]

Hee! I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on more in this 'verse, yup :D

Thanks!

[mori76.livejournal.com]

god. i read this a while ago, when you first posted it, i think. i wasn't able to leave a comment then because my brain had melted out of my ears. i thought i'd be able to process this a bit better if i gave it some time and came back to it. yeah, not so much.

it's not just hot, it's this-

He won’t let them out there, no one’s touching them; even the thought of it makes his own blood rush and writhe in his veins, his instincts snapping to wound and maim.

and this-

His eyes are glazed but dark more with defiance than with the curse, he’s still Sammy; still John’s son and Dean’s brother, but it’s like he’s reveling in all that entails now, rather than rebelling against it.

ahhh and dean in control is something i can never see enough. i lovelovelove that dean is the one calling the shots.

just... wow. this is an awesome piece for SO many reasons. well done, again! :)

[hope]

*beams* Thank you!! I'm glad you like it. And, I can't seem to write pure PWP, it always seems to much hotter when it's still *them* and thus completely fucked-up :D

Thank you so much for coming back to leave feedback. This has made me very happy :D

[dullemarulle.livejournal.com]

...You've rendered me speechless. I am completely in awe of your writing. All the details and descriptions work so well. I think I was going to say something more, but I forgot.
Hope it's okay that I friended you?

[hope]

*beams* you're too kind! Thank you!!

Friend away :D I'm glad you're enjoying it.