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puddingsmith ([personal profile] hope) wrote2006-10-20 12:23 am

Three ways the Winchesters never lost their memory (1/3)

Supernatural. John, Dean, Sam. Pre-series, PG-13. This part gen. by [livejournal.com profile] angstslashhope.

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[identity profile] naewinter.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Dude.
innie_darling: (dean breaks my heart)

[personal profile] innie_darling 2006-10-19 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, God. DEAN.

point of his nose sharp as he presses his face to John’s belly That detail just hurts.

And baby Sammy and Dean trying to ease things, and knowing he needs to give his father his name. Oh.
ext_7751: (johnandkids)

[identity profile] janissa11.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. I don't really know what to say except that, and it's so believable, plausible. For all of them.

[identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Yipes!

“It was just a few minutes. I… Sammy needed food. It’s been days, Dad.”
“I…” John shifts his weight, half lifts a hand; and the older boy tenses. John’s breath catches. “I’m sorry,” he says.


*adores you*

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 04:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, John...

Dean so scared he'd done the wrong thing, Sammy so happy to have his daddy back and not getting it at all.

I know it's a "three ways" fic, and I know it's 1/3 but part of me really wants to know what happens next in this one.

[identity profile] misshallelujah.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this-- great descriptions, as usual-- and I want to know what happens next!

[identity profile] kikiduck.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 07:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. Oh, poor little oddly capable Dean and his bag of groceries and he's going to fix everything and *flaily hands*

[identity profile] zephyruscrowe.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm really liking this.
Any chance you'll explore this part farther in the future?

You hit Dean square on the head in this one. WEE!Sammy too.

[identity profile] maharetr.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
"made you grow up too fast"

“It was just a few minutes. I… Sammy needed food. It’s been days, Dad.” ... “It’s okay,” the boy says. He takes a deep breath that John can hear the shudder of. “It’s… Dean. I’m Dean.” He loosens his grip on Sammy a little. “We’ll fix this. It’ll be okay.”

Oh, DEAN my heart squeezes for you.
It's a "3 times thing", right? does that mean we jump straight to another time after this? *whimper*

[identity profile] sangga.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
excellent

[identity profile] sajee.livejournal.com 2006-10-20 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
you are ev0l.

that is all.
embroiderama: (John Winchester)

[personal profile] embroiderama 2006-10-20 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. This is wonderful--so different and really feeling true and possible. All of them...gah.

[identity profile] alznthlay.livejournal.com 2006-10-20 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
*flails at fic*

Uhm, HI!

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