Precipitate

[hope]

Supernatural; John/Dean, NC-17, PWP (pre-series: college years). by angstslashhope.

For the Get John Laid challenge at papawinchester. Thank you to derryderrydown for boundless enthusiasm and feedback, and to kitsune_red for an awesome beta.

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Comments

[nixwilliams.livejournal.com]

YOU! did i ever mention how hard you rock? thought so!

again, i really enjoy your style - how the piece is grounded in all those tiny, external physical sensations (hair, skin, rain, roughness), and how they are counterpointed by the ache and burn from dean's pov...

(one little thing. i think this sentence is missing a comma or a couple of words: Dean jerks back, then leans up further, trying to shake off the grip even shifts to straddle Dad’s hips instead. go and fix it, Mx Perfectionist!)

[nixwilliams.livejournal.com]

... and also! van van oil!!! dean's ass is gonna be protected from all things evil! your john is a genius.

[hope]

Why carry lube when you can work voodoo mojo and fuck at the same time?

[nixwilliams.livejournal.com]

exactly. my point exactly.

[hope]

*sigh* I tells ya, all this editing of various things has MELTED MY BRAINS. words? they no longer mean anything to me.

Hee. I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks.

[cuissesdefer.livejournal.com]

Oh, RAD. I love this. It's so in character because not only is it raining and they're in a tray bed, but the sparse dialogue is totally NEED TO KNOW.

One thing I love about John that gets mentioned a lot in fic is his beard. I am so glad you included it too. It's just so....manly! *melts*

I love these two. They're just explosively hot to look at and when Dean subs like this all needy and smart-arsed, it's just like an early Christmas present. You rock! Thank you for posting this ^__^

[hope]

heee! yay for subbish Dean :D yay for Christmas presents!!

I'm glad you liked this. Thank you for commenting!!!

[zortified.livejournal.com]

This was great! I love how Dean went from bitchy/whiny to playing, nuding Dad's knee and spurring him on. I like the atmosphere a lot - no angst or dark, just two guys stuck in the rain. More or less. ;-)

[hope]

hee! yeah, just two guys with senses of humour who love each other a lot, stuck in the rain. I figure they can't have been angsting the *entire* four years Sam was gone :D

Thanks!!

[amalthia]

I liked this. :)

[hope]

Yay! Thank you :)

[lcsbanana.livejournal.com]

*SQUEAK*

ohhhh. fidgety pushy dean in the rain, just...SQUEAK.

[hope]

:D They totally wrassled ALL THE TIME. More, even, once Sam wasn't there to roll his eyes at them anymore. *SQUISHES THEIR LITTLE HEADS*

hi. Thanks!

[phantomas.livejournal.com]

I didn't tell you HOW much I loved this! I do! All shades of love! Great, manly dialogue (that is, little of it;), snark, rain everywhere. Perfect :D
thanks!

[hope]

Heee! I'm really glad you liked this. yay! Thank YOU!

[hansbekhart.livejournal.com]

Hot DAMN. That was totally awesome. Funny, hot, just wonderful. I'm so incredibly happy to have found your fics; there is a serious lack of John/Dean fics out there, at least as far as I've seen. I loved this also as a counterpart to Prelude; they're both themed around the setting and the temperature, but where Prelude felt smothered, sweaty and all kinds of other S words, this felt very different. I don't know if this makes sense, but the awkwardness of their sex and the gorgeous physical descriptions that ground the sex fit wonderful with the structure, the clunky and cold mood.

You know, you seem pretty much made out of awesome and I've scoped a couple of your meta-type posts on your main journal - I hope you don't mind if I friend that one as well.

[hope]

there is a serious lack of John/Dean fics out there, at least as far as I've seen

Oh god yes! that's half the reason I write the pairing; no one's writing what I want to read!!

And yep, that counterpoint-to-Prelude makes sense, though it wasn't entirely intentional when I wrote it! But thank you, yay!

And yay again! hee. I have friended you also, now you get to put up with my random life posts, hee. I am totally going to pester you to write some john/dean too, now :D

[hansbekhart.livejournal.com]

Does this mean that I get to pester you for John/Dean also? :p Actually, my next project is a sort of JDM/JA fic, involving roleplaying as John and Dean :D:D:D. Does that count?

[hope]

hah! pester away. pretty much all i write these days is john/dean, john/sam/dean or gen, so your pestering will be fruitful.

Alas, I am not an RPS gal in this fandom! but rock on with your bad RPS self, that does indeed sound awesome :D

[vileseagulls.livejournal.com]

I...


I...




I WAS JUST ABOUT TO START WRITING THAT.

[vileseagulls.livejournal.com]

Um, oh yeah, and Hope, I really liked the fic. *facepalms*

No, seriously. Hot and fun and mm, hot.

[hope]

Hee. Thanks.

Also, fandom collective consciousness. oh, i am familiar.

[vileseagulls.livejournal.com]

*facepalm x infinity*

:)

[hansbekhart.livejournal.com]

Ahahaha! Write away. And dude, let me know when it's done! I never ended up tackling that fic, actually, so it's free and clear and hey, there's enough room in fandom for everyone :D.

[vileseagulls.livejournal.com]

And like, everyone stared at me so strangely when I said I wanted to do that.

I've got two more bits of porn in the queue before that, actually, so it may take me a little while, but I very much want to do it.

*rarrs*

Thank you. :)