[identity profile] sharpest_rose.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Gosh, I like your brain ever so. *goes to rec*

[identity profile] mcee.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
that is beyond fabulous. exactly how i imagine those three to be. love the bits about jo, too. her interaction with john is so touching.

YAY THIS.

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[identity profile] kitsune-red.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
That means good. Seriously. I need to go change my panties now kthx.

For some reason? I kept picturing Bill as Alan Tudyk. I.. not on purpose! He just.. popped in there, and it felt right.

Hah, we'll prolly all get jossed and they call him Tony, and he's this really potbellied chopper-riding dude. ;)

Such John characterization -- I'm in awe. The body language, it's exactly right. *I LOVE THIS*

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[personal profile] brownbetty 2006-11-06 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
Mm, yeah, this is perfect. John's like this feral cat they feed who never stays long enough.
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[personal profile] embroiderama 2006-11-06 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, yeah, that's just exacty perfect. Your language here is gorgeous.

She’s more likely to look round one day, see the path that she’s woven up behind her, not remember each stitch.

Lovely. And I like to think about John having friends like these, people who cared about him to keep him warm sometimes, but I wish he had let Dean and Sam in on that extended family, too.
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[personal profile] amalthia 2006-11-06 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
I really enjoyed this story. :)

[identity profile] mikhale.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
This is the first John slash (well, John with another guy) fic I've ever read and... guh, it is sold to me. SOLD. Like Sam's ass to Dean.

I want to read more John slash but no, I am sk33red that the others just won't be as good as this.

Best part of the fic?

"Sammy?" John croaks...

Because that's just all the awesome right there.

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[identity profile] mona1347.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY FUCKING GOD, I CAN'T EVEN ARTICULATE.

*flails helplessly*

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[identity profile] derryderrydown.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 04:17 am (UTC)(link)
YAAAAY! Dude, you totally rule and I love this in three thousand different ways and John is all warm and YES and my words don't work.

[identity profile] nixwilliams.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 07:42 am (UTC)(link)
Let's see, then. INDEED! this is awesome. supergreat! i adore it all - the sexing and the very sweet waking up, with john's sleepy sammy/jo confusion. and ELLEN, because, yeah... mmm...


[the sheep have done some proofreading, and they say that and digs in his pocked needs attention.]

[identity profile] naewinter.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 12:03 pm (UTC)(link)
There are words somewhere in me to describe my feelings for this but fucked if I can find them. *LOVES*

ps: I so agree with Alan Tudyk = W.A.H (Wash?), it's just moved into my brain and isn't moving. He just leaves such a different shape than John does.

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[identity profile] hunterbyblood.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I've never been one to read slash involving John ((*its always been Dean/Sam*)) but I absolutely loved this. And dude, John so needed to bring in the boys. Especially if the Harvelle's were like a family to him. That family should've been with the boys too.

I absolutely loved this. Awesome job.

[identity profile] nasus221.livejournal.com 2006-11-08 01:29 am (UTC)(link)
HOMG so good.

Loved this bit:

"John lifts his hands up, holding them out as if to placate her, but his mouth’s twisted up in a smirk as well. “Wouldn’t dream of it,” he says, not parroting, just different inflection."

I can just SEE Ellen scolding him and I can just SEE that JDM smirk.

And the part with John giving Jo candy was so darn cute! Jo was so the little girl John never had and never got to treat like a princess.

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[identity profile] gelasius.livejournal.com 2006-11-12 08:37 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. Oh, you.

She’s more likely to look round one day, see the path that she’s woven up behind her, not remember each stitch.

I don't think I'm the first one to toss this line right back at you, but really. Wowzers, that's beautiful and just ELLEN. Your all three of them are fucking amazing, and this is exactly how a threesome should be in every gorgeous little detail of interaction.

They safe?
Every second of every day.


*places fingers on chest dramatically*

*deep breath*

Okay. I'm good now.

Say, if you ever need anything? Like a kidney? Or my firstborn child? It's yours.

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[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2006-11-14 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
This is absolutely magnificent. And amazingly hot.
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[personal profile] trinity_clare 2006-11-16 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
This is being filed under "why the hell is this not canon?" Because this is TOTALLY how it happened. Ayup. *nods sagely* And did I mention the cute? And the fluffy? And the hot? And how these things so rarely happen in the same fic? Guh.

[identity profile] elmathelas.livejournal.com 2007-01-08 08:10 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome story. I love the interaction between John and Jo as much as I love the very hot sex between her parents and John. Nicely balanced.