You write what *I* consider the best Wee!Dean and Wee!Sam, bar none and I adore your John. A lot of people don't write children convincingly and moreover can't quite get the essence of the characters. You succeed marvelously with both. Brava. :D
I think my favourite bit is where Dean totally figures out that this is John, but he still doesn't let him in, and asks John to tell him how to change Sam.
I finally could sit down and enojoy the read, and awwww *preens* it's for ME! thank you *hugs you and story*
Tired, cold and ih-his-underwear John out in the parking lot *giggles* yes, I can see that happening. Your baby!Dean is lovely, serious and committed to his guard duty.
“Zeppelin rules.” Dean grins, and slaps John’s held-out hand.
This is adorable, and you've captured them all so well. Loved John's frustration and Dean's resourcefulness, and somehow you made baby Sam seem like...Sam.
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Racing off to read more...
:-)
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Dean is so Dean even then, protecting wee!Sammy.
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I think my favourite bit is where Dean totally figures out that this is John, but he still doesn't let him in, and asks John to tell him how to change Sam.
Gorgeous writing.
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thank you *hugs you and story*
Tired, cold and ih-his-underwear John out in the parking lot *giggles* yes, I can see that happening. Your baby!Dean is lovely, serious and committed to his guard duty.
“Zeppelin rules.”
Dean grins, and slaps John’s held-out hand.
That line/image?
Breaks me. *hugs you*
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*off to read the others, which I'm sure will be just as good"
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*Hugs*
*Runs to next one!*
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