You write what *I* consider the best Wee!Dean and Wee!Sam, bar none and I adore your John. A lot of people don't write children convincingly and moreover can't quite get the essence of the characters. You succeed marvelously with both. Brava. :D
*beams* thank you so much!! The easy way to write babies + characterisation is just to write the characters as your normally would, just with more hedonism and less inhibition :D
I think my favourite bit is where Dean totally figures out that this is John, but he still doesn't let him in, and asks John to tell him how to change Sam.
Thank you!! I totally think that in the early days, John would have done anything just to make it that much easier (or possible at all) with two wee kids, which included making things into games to get Dean cooperate enthusiastically. Sometimes, this backfired.
I finally could sit down and enojoy the read, and awwww *preens* it's for ME! thank you *hugs you and story*
Tired, cold and ih-his-underwear John out in the parking lot *giggles* yes, I can see that happening. Your baby!Dean is lovely, serious and committed to his guard duty.
“Zeppelin rules.” Dean grins, and slaps John’s held-out hand.
This is adorable, and you've captured them all so well. Loved John's frustration and Dean's resourcefulness, and somehow you made baby Sam seem like...Sam.
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Yay you! I'm tickled. Thank you :D
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Racing off to read more...
:-)
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Dean is so Dean even then, protecting wee!Sammy.
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Thank you :D
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Thanks!
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I think my favourite bit is where Dean totally figures out that this is John, but he still doesn't let him in, and asks John to tell him how to change Sam.
Gorgeous writing.
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thank you *hugs you and story*
Tired, cold and ih-his-underwear John out in the parking lot *giggles* yes, I can see that happening. Your baby!Dean is lovely, serious and committed to his guard duty.
“Zeppelin rules.”
Dean grins, and slaps John’s held-out hand.
That line/image?
Breaks me. *hugs you*
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:D
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*off to read the others, which I'm sure will be just as good"
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*Hugs*
*Runs to next one!*
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