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puddingsmith ([personal profile] hope) wrote2006-11-17 09:24 am

In Memoriam: July, 1984

Supernatural; Winchesters, pre-series, G. Part of the In Memoriam collection of domestic fluff. This one for [livejournal.com profile] _audrey. By [livejournal.com profile] angstslashhope.

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[identity profile] sharpest_rose.livejournal.com 2006-11-16 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I think this story may have actually broken some sort of glee-muscle in my head. You make Ickle Dean and Baby Sam utterly damn adorable without ever tipping over into twee or cloying, which is an amazing skill when writing kids.

[identity profile] killabeez.livejournal.com 2006-11-16 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I swear, I feel like every word you write happened exactly like this. Please never stop, okay?

[identity profile] lcsbanana.livejournal.com 2006-11-16 10:42 pm (UTC)(link)
*incoherent squeaky noises* OMG BAAAAAAAAAABIES. WITH CRAYONS. :D :D :D :D :D

[identity profile] derryderrydown.livejournal.com 2006-11-16 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Technicolour nappies! Oh, BOYS.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_audrey/ 2006-11-17 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
*DELIGHTED SQUEAKS*

Oh, *babies*. And your John is so awesome. :D Thankyou so much for this!

[identity profile] ewanspotter.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
I gotta know, where'd you get that icon? It's freakin' amusing.

[identity profile] ewanspotter.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
That's awesome. Do they have a art website/LJ by any chance?

[identity profile] gillianinoz.livejournal.com 2006-11-17 10:44 am (UTC)(link)
Sammy's chubby feet are filling me with warm fuzzy thoughts. I love long-suffering Dean as well. So cute!

You gotta feel for John - hah!

[identity profile] monkiedude.livejournal.com 2006-11-17 12:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, MY. Dean cracking himself up. And JOHN. EEEEEE!

[identity profile] squee1123.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
eeheehee. i love these guys

[identity profile] nasus221.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
"Sam’s diapers will be technicolor for the next couple of days."
LOL right before I read that I was thinking "Sam's going to literally shitting rainbows."

Kids say the darndest things.
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[identity profile] labellementeuse.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 07:52 am (UTC)(link)
OMFG. BABIES. Technicolour nappies, does that really happen? That's hilarious. I love precocious wee Dean (and Sammy!)

[identity profile] eloise-bright.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 11:08 am (UTC)(link)
I loved the wee boys, but in this I love John more. He's just such a good dad.


Of course. John’s hair was usually blue, Dean’s orange. Sammy usually bright yellow. No wonder he didn’t recognize them. “Where’s the roof?”

That's perfect. And the line about puking on the paper - that's inspired. I love these little moments between them.

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[identity profile] phantomas.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh dear, John and wee!Dean bonding in the car over wee!Sammy's manipulation and misbehaviour, and for some reason, the image of John driving and checking on his boys and only being able to see bits of them, and John reaching blindly for Dean's drawing....love these domestic moments. Damn, you're so good ;)

[identity profile] nixwilliams.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
“Dean.” John presses his fingers briefly to the bridge of his nose. “What did I say about letting Sammy put things in his mouth?”

this? is me choking on vegemite toast.

oh... this is possibly the greatest story ever written. EVAR. and i don't like kids, but apparantly i like them when they're dean and sam written by you!

[identity profile] nixwilliams.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
DAY TWO: SAMMY'S FOOD DIARY, BY DEAN

mushy apple baby food, one jar (first half fed to him by dad, second half by dean because dad had to take a phone call and sammy started crying when he wasn't getting fed)

mushy cereal, three spoons (because when sammy finished the apple puree he started sooking again, and dad was still on the phone, so dean fed him the rest of his own breakfast)

mud (what? they were playing in the garden outside daddy's friends' house. all babies eat mud don't they? besides, dean tasted it, and it didn't taste poisonous. it wasn't too good to chew on, though, because the grit made his neck shiver)

a worm (dean knew he should let sammy eat worms, but... WORMS! and sammy already had it in his mouth, and it was only a small worm)

more baby food and stuff (dean doesn't really know what it was, he should ask dad)

crayons, one blue, one green, half a red (dean already used half the red one drawing BLOOD)

[TBC] ...
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[identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
"it was only a small worm" is possibly the best justfication EVER for sam eating things he's not supposed to. i love that. ^_^

[identity profile] 1grl-revolution.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
This was awesome! This line, "“I swear to god, Dean, if you even think the word ‘tickle’ then I’m going to pull over right now and you can walk to Albuquerque.”" Made me laugh outloud! Too cute.
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[identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
i'm giggling like a crazy person and am SO glad i live alone, because how do you explain wee!winchesters and sammy eating all the good crayons? they're ADORABLE, wee!dean especially. and i love the way sammy is already a master manipulator of dad and dean. so cute!
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[identity profile] dotfic.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 04:10 am (UTC)(link)
This is just...awwww. Dean's such a real kid in this, and John is John, fumbling and in some ways clueless as a father but also loving and connected and delighted with his kids.

[identity profile] ewanspotter.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
“I told you, Sammy ate all the good ones.”


Big. Giant. HEE.

This is amazing. You write our Wee boys so well. :D

[identity profile] faithintheboys.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
That was so cute! And hysterical. I am in falling in love with your Dean and John!
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[personal profile] lark_ascends 2006-11-20 12:36 pm (UTC)(link)
This is perfect. Evil Dean, feeding Sammy crayons. I love his logic about the roof of the car. And the fact that they all have different coloured hair in the pictures.

[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com 2006-11-22 12:16 pm (UTC)(link)
It is the funniest thing ever, lol!! Lemme guess - you have a 4 year old and a toddler yourself? *Cracks up* and John's joke was perfect!! And the Albuquerque comment?! Priceless!! LOL.... Now if only you could do one where they make a wrong turn when heading to Albuquerque and wind up in Transylvania... *Chuckles*

*Obviously needs coffee*

*Hugs*

*Runs to next goodie!*