I think this story may have actually broken some sort of glee-muscle in my head. You make Ickle Dean and Baby Sam utterly damn adorable without ever tipping over into twee or cloying, which is an amazing skill when writing kids.
"Sam’s diapers will be technicolor for the next couple of days." LOL right before I read that I was thinking "Sam's going to literally shitting rainbows."
*beams* I don't know how people can sloppily characterise John as mean, they clearly have so much history and SO MUCH LOVE for each other. With which I mean to say, er, little moments, yes. LITTLE MOMENTS OF LOVE. *smooshes them*
Oh dear, John and wee!Dean bonding in the car over wee!Sammy's manipulation and misbehaviour, and for some reason, the image of John driving and checking on his boys and only being able to see bits of them, and John reaching blindly for Dean's drawing....love these domestic moments. Damn, you're so good ;)
“Dean.” John presses his fingers briefly to the bridge of his nose. “What did I say about letting Sammy put things in his mouth?”
this? is me choking on vegemite toast.
oh... this is possibly the greatest story ever written. EVAR. and i don't like kids, but apparantly i like them when they're dean and sam written by you!
mushy apple baby food, one jar (first half fed to him by dad, second half by dean because dad had to take a phone call and sammy started crying when he wasn't getting fed)
mushy cereal, three spoons (because when sammy finished the apple puree he started sooking again, and dad was still on the phone, so dean fed him the rest of his own breakfast)
mud (what? they were playing in the garden outside daddy's friends' house. all babies eat mud don't they? besides, dean tasted it, and it didn't taste poisonous. it wasn't too good to chew on, though, because the grit made his neck shiver)
a worm (dean knew he should let sammy eat worms, but... WORMS! and sammy already had it in his mouth, and it was only a small worm)
more baby food and stuff (dean doesn't really know what it was, he should ask dad)
crayons, one blue, one green, half a red (dean already used half the red one drawing BLOOD)
This was awesome! This line, "“I swear to god, Dean, if you even think the word ‘tickle’ then I’m going to pull over right now and you can walk to Albuquerque.”" Made me laugh outloud! Too cute.
i'm giggling like a crazy person and am SO glad i live alone, because how do you explain wee!winchesters and sammy eating all the good crayons? they're ADORABLE, wee!dean especially. and i love the way sammy is already a master manipulator of dad and dean. so cute!
This is just...awwww. Dean's such a real kid in this, and John is John, fumbling and in some ways clueless as a father but also loving and connected and delighted with his kids.
This is perfect. Evil Dean, feeding Sammy crayons. I love his logic about the roof of the car. And the fact that they all have different coloured hair in the pictures.
It is the funniest thing ever, lol!! Lemme guess - you have a 4 year old and a toddler yourself? *Cracks up* and John's joke was perfect!! And the Albuquerque comment?! Priceless!! LOL.... Now if only you could do one where they make a wrong turn when heading to Albuquerque and wind up in Transylvania... *Chuckles*
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BABIES.
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Oh, *babies*. And your John is so awesome. :D Thankyou so much for this!
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You gotta feel for John - hah!
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:)
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YAY. thank you :D
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LOL right before I read that I was thinking "Sam's going to literally shitting rainbows."
Kids say the darndest things.
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Thank you :D
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Thank you! Yay :D
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Of course. John’s hair was usually blue, Dean’s orange. Sammy usually bright yellow. No wonder he didn’t recognize them. “Where’s the roof?”
That's perfect. And the line about puking on the paper - that's inspired. I love these little moments between them.
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Thank you! I'm really glad you liked these :D
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this? is me choking on vegemite toast.
oh... this is possibly the greatest story ever written. EVAR. and i don't like kids, but apparantly i like them when they're dean and sam written by you!
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Hee. SEE. BABIES ARE CUTE. ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY'RE WINCHESTERS.
Thank youuu :D
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mushy apple baby food, one jar (first half fed to him by dad, second half by dean because dad had to take a phone call and sammy started crying when he wasn't getting fed)
mushy cereal, three spoons (because when sammy finished the apple puree he started sooking again, and dad was still on the phone, so dean fed him the rest of his own breakfast)
mud (what? they were playing in the garden outside daddy's friends' house. all babies eat mud don't they? besides, dean tasted it, and it didn't taste poisonous. it wasn't too good to chew on, though, because the grit made his neck shiver)
a worm (dean knew he should let sammy eat worms, but... WORMS! and sammy already had it in his mouth, and it was only a small worm)
more baby food and stuff (dean doesn't really know what it was, he should ask dad)
crayons, one blue, one green, half a red (dean already used half the red one drawing BLOOD)
[TBC] ...
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SEE. BABIES.
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*G* Thank you!
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Thank you :)
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Big. Giant. HEE.
This is amazing. You write our Wee boys so well. :D
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Thank you :)
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*Obviously needs coffee*
*Hugs*
*Runs to next goodie!*
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Heee. Thank you :D