[identity profile] bluesister.livejournal.com 2007-02-04 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the idea of the family knowing something the demon does not.

John's hands gloved red in it
beautiful writing, whole thing
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[identity profile] phantomas.livejournal.com 2007-02-05 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
Uh, that's quite intense.
Love this:
his closest cuts come when he's at the farthest distance

[identity profile] marysue007.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 05:11 am (UTC)(link)
wow
This is just too good to be so short.
I would love to see you continue this. To see this entire situation play out; and to see it from John's POV like this is wonderful. It is just so personal the way you write it. And I love your take on John.