[identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com 2005-11-19 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
I forgot to mention that I like how this idea provides a cool explanation for why Simon never really could show affection for Kaylee. FocussedonRiverRobotSimon just can't do it.

[identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com 2005-11-19 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
"robot!" line in 'the message'

OMG! I completely forgot about that line (The Message is an episode I don't particularly enjoy so I haven't seen it 5 million times - unlike the other episodes). That subtle ep connection thing you've done here makes this fic even more cool.