This was a truly gorgeous fic. I really love how you portray John. I often see him portrayed as this hardened and uncaring man, but he truly loves his sons. It's just that their circumstances aren't the same as your normal everyday family. You captured him perfectly. Something in between the happy, carefree father we saw in the pilot and the calculating hunter we saw in later episodes. I love how you portray baby!Sam and young!Dean, too. From the baby mannerisms to Dean's protective streak, they are very much in character while still true to their ages. Great job.
I have to say, though, that I love how you brought future Dean and Sam into the story, especially having Sam turn when John yells and look right at him later.
This was well-planned out and creepy and a lot of fun to read. :)
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I have to say, though, that I love how you brought future Dean and Sam into the story, especially having Sam turn when John yells and look right at him later.
This was well-planned out and creepy and a lot of fun to read. :)
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