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puddingsmith ([personal profile] hope) wrote2006-11-17 01:22 pm

little rattle stilt

Supernatural; Sammy, pre-series (circa 1988-9), PG. by [livejournal.com profile] angstslashhope.

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Fanart for this story by [livejournal.com profile] _audrey. ♥!

I've done a 'DVD commentary' for this fic, which you can read here.

[identity profile] astrothsknot.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
jesus God! That had me screaming!

It's brilliant!!

[identity profile] faithintheboys.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
That was amazing, awesome job! That made me cry, and shake and smile. Aww man....

[identity profile] popmusicjunkie.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Oh God!
I...uh.
*flail*
I can't breathe.
*big gulpy breath*
For the love of GOD! This story broke my heart.
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[personal profile] amalthia 2006-11-20 07:31 am (UTC)(link)
omg, this story made me cry!!!! Um really this hit me in heart and I really felt bad for Sam.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 08:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my god... that was just so very pretty and little Sammy being all lonely and awwwwww....

[identity profile] palebluebell.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 08:35 am (UTC)(link)
This had such a strong effect on me, I thought it was so well done. You held onto little Sam's young voice so strongly, and managed to make so real all his confusion and fear and how he missed his family. It was really a beautiful story - thank you.

[identity profile] forgotten-pixie.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 10:34 am (UTC)(link)
Just found this and so happy I did because it's so, so lovely. Poor Sammy, your writing was so incredible I felt like I was him and as scared as him and awwwww *hugs him* Thank goodness Dean & John saved him at the end, that was probably the loveliest thing ever.

[identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 08:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Jesus Christ, I'm going to have councillors on my case soon, what with openly snivelling in public computer clusters.

That little-boy panic and heart-ache kicked me in the gut hard, so effective and emotive. And then Dean coming to rescue him! And Mr. Bun! *dies*

[identity profile] daybright.livejournal.com 2006-11-21 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
beautiful, good work

[identity profile] jezdenly.livejournal.com 2006-11-21 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, you broke me. I don't think I've ever sobbed so hard reading a story, and no one even died! GUUHHH, honestly. I'm *still* crying as I write this.
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[personal profile] lark_ascends 2006-11-21 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Wow.

And I say that from the bottom of my heart.

[identity profile] boogirl13.livejournal.com 2006-11-21 03:54 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely. Just so scary and sweet and OMG! Mr. Bun. I love Mr. Bun and the mention of him just pulls that story in to this one for me.

Excellent job.
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[personal profile] vass 2006-11-21 06:34 am (UTC)(link)
Why did I read this?
Why didn't I read this sooner?

*wails*
*hugs nearest animal*

[identity profile] minna.livejournal.com 2006-11-21 11:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god I feel like I've been punched in the stomach.

That was amazing.

[identity profile] rio87.livejournal.com 2006-11-21 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
O.M.F.G.

*Adds to memories*

Sammy's (and my) pain when they said that John had taken Dean and gone under ground, You took my Dad away. *whimpers* DEAN and hugs, Daddy and Baby Boy, how only motel sheets smell 'right', MISTER FUCKING BUN!...you've broken my heart

*starts picking up ♥ pieces while clutching her stuffed bunny*

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[identity profile] dotfic.livejournal.com 2006-11-22 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
This is wonderful. You get Sammy's child POV so right. I really liked how terrifying the ordinariness of Miss Bouvarie's house was to Sam, how terrifying it was for him to be separated from his father and Dean.

So painful and effective. Wow. Heartbreaking. Gorgeous work. :D

[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com 2006-11-22 12:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohhhh... *Is rendered speechless*

The imagery... The loss...

The coming Home....

This fic...*Stares in awe*...this fic...

*Shakes head wordlessly - swipes at a stray tear or two...*

Gorgeous, honey... Poor Sammy....

I loved this - beginning to end... And yes, it DOES sound like something that would happen to them... Poor, poor Boyos...

*Snuggles you*

*Is still breathless*

A work of Art, dear!! Utterly fabulous...

*HUGS*

[identity profile] nighoney.livejournal.com 2006-11-23 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. what an amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing, it was beautiful.

[identity profile] ow-bandaid.livejournal.com 2006-11-23 02:06 am (UTC)(link)
Argh. Heart. Broken! That was BEAUTIFUL.

[identity profile] iamzulma.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
this felt so real, and it just made ache for poor sammy! this a very well0-written fic. i can imagine this happening, you know? i love that john and dean save the day and rescue sammy; it really couldn't have ended any other way, and with mr. bun! i love that bit, especially. :)

[identity profile] lalla32.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! You actually made me cry with this!! ç_ç Beautiful story... I was so happy when they got together in the end... so so sweet!

*gives little Sammy a hug*

Thank you for sharing it! <3
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[personal profile] embroiderama 2006-11-27 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG! WHy hadn't I read this yet? This is just terrifying and heartbreaking and so totally possible. The love crackling between them all when they get Sammy back just about broke me.

[identity profile] hinokumo.livejournal.com 2006-11-28 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
OMG you've given me an angst-induced heart attack!

“Yeah,” Dean says. “He missed you, but I took care of him for you.”

...then you zapped me back to life with Sam's rescue. This was SO AWESOME!

[identity profile] baylorsr.livejournal.com 2006-12-03 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
I told [livejournal.com profile] liptonrm earlier today about a crazy SPN discussion the sister and I were having about child protective services taking the boys from John and how I was dying for such a fanfic and she said, oh, but [livejournal.com profile] angstslashhope wrote that recently! and it being from you, it's exactly the thing that I was dying for. So sweet and tender and wee! Thanks.

[identity profile] ivy03.livejournal.com 2006-12-10 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
This absolutely broke my heart. And I love it so much for that. It's such a heartbreaking and real portrayal of how Sammy views his family and what his childhood is really like. I love how he blames himself and how lost he is without Dean and his father.

This moment:
“Sammy,” Dad says just as soft. “Baby boy.”
Is now one of my favorite moments in Supernatural fanon. This was fantastic.

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