[identity profile] mimarie.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
This is breathtaking. Beautiful, intense, funny, filthy, hot - gorgeous. And this:

The overwhelming chaos of their convergence lasts just a moment; then they sync to Jack’s pounding beat, match the cadence of Gwen’s panting, fuck to the frantic thud of Ianto’s heart.

I swear I can feel my heart hitting every beat of that.