Fic: Lucky Number (Torchwood, Jack/Ianto/Gwen, NC-17) [2/2]

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Comments

[copracat]

You know, I think your tweets exaggerated the amount of porn in that story.

:D

It kind of breaks my heart a little, knowing that Jack knows they're stuck there, that it's his fault. But that's very Jack, isn't it?

[neifile7.livejournal.com]

I will have to comment later at more length, but this was a hot, brilliant and ever so slightly heartbreaking way to start the day. Your Jack and Ianto are always brilliant horny dudes, but I adore how sexy and demanding you've made Gwen, and how naturally she falls into the threesome.

[msilverstar]

Jack’s flaws are what Ianto likes best about him

Ianto is quite appealing when he gets his devious on, as it were

Some of the best porn ever!!!

[laurenmitchell.livejournal.com]

I don't even care that I don't know the show because omg. Shinyshiny fic.

[cupidsbow.livejournal.com]

This turned out so awesome. The edge of unease just cranks everything right up. Guh.

[51stcenturyfox.livejournal.com]

Oh my... word.

Seeing this story first thing in the morning was like waking up and finding a winning lottery ticket taped to my forehead.

So much win.

[amand-r.livejournal.com]

WOAH WITH THE PORN.

You make me retire from porn. This is it. It is over.

Everyone go home. To wank.

[unstealthy.livejournal.com]

OMFG. OMFG.

This is my present. Nobody's ever written anything like this for me before. I'm beyond words. Just beyond words. Thank you thank you thank you. It's exactly the sort of thing I love: lots of character, humour and fabulous sex. And with that little edge of Torchwood darkness.

(And don't you love it that SF means you can conjur up any situation you like in which our heroes have no choice but to have lots and lots of sex?)

Thank you again.

[hab318princess.livejournal.com]

wow... just wow... (and from a very confirmed Janto shipper that is meant as a compliment!) amazing fic

[zsazsa4168.livejournal.com]

Five stars out of three!

Your kink has definitely been my kink today. Thanks.

[mimarie.livejournal.com]

This is breathtaking. Beautiful, intense, funny, filthy, hot - gorgeous. And this:

The overwhelming chaos of their convergence lasts just a moment; then they sync to Jack’s pounding beat, match the cadence of Gwen’s panting, fuck to the frantic thud of Ianto’s heart.

I swear I can feel my heart hitting every beat of that.

[samstjames.livejournal.com]

Oh my God is this awesome! So hot, so dirty, so... duh, my vocabulary is embarrassingly failing me :D.

[curriejean.livejournal.com]

GUH. Can't even really express the level of GUH here. I'm amazed at how much textual body you can give a sex scene without ever letting it get redundant in the next or the next.

[madame-mary.livejournal.com]

Bloody brilliant. Simply Wow!!

[sanginmychains.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, okay, I just re-read this and was surprised to see no comment from me here, because --

See I've been reading very porny fic for long enough now that it's ceased to be especially arousing. I take it mostly intellectually. I experience pleasure, but it's all mental.

Not to put too fine a point on it, but since I read this? This scenario informs most of my uh, "personal time" fantasies.

Not even kidding.

So - I will be in my bunk. Actually in my bunk. Doing that thing that people are expected to do, while in their bunks.

Probably TMI there.

[nancybrown.livejournal.com]

That was a really interesting read. :)

[frakkin-addict.livejournal.com]

Wow, OMG! That's a hot threesome. Really enjoyed this, thanks!

[terebi-me.livejournal.com]

This is one of the best things I've EVER READ EVER IN MY LIFE.

Immense joy. This is the new gold standard.