copracat: Jack Harkness (Jack)

[personal profile] copracat 2010-01-16 10:33 am (UTC)(link)
You know, I think your tweets exaggerated the amount of porn in that story.

:D

It kind of breaks my heart a little, knowing that Jack knows they're stuck there, that it's his fault. But that's very Jack, isn't it?
Edited (fixed typo) 2010-01-16 10:34 (UTC)

[identity profile] neifile7.livejournal.com 2010-01-16 12:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I will have to comment later at more length, but this was a hot, brilliant and ever so slightly heartbreaking way to start the day. Your Jack and Ianto are always brilliant horny dudes, but I adore how sexy and demanding you've made Gwen, and how naturally she falls into the threesome.
msilverstar: (john barrowman laugh)

[personal profile] msilverstar 2010-01-19 06:21 am (UTC)(link)
Jack’s flaws are what Ianto likes best about him

Ianto is quite appealing when he gets his devious on, as it were

Some of the best porn ever!!!
Edited (icon love) 2010-01-19 06:21 (UTC)
msilverstar: (john barrowman laugh)

[personal profile] msilverstar 2010-01-27 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
For some reason, diigolet hates your pages here and won't load. So I recced the one on LJ instead!

[identity profile] laurenmitchell.livejournal.com 2010-01-16 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't even care that I don't know the show because omg. Shinyshiny fic.

[identity profile] cupidsbow.livejournal.com 2010-01-16 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
This turned out so awesome. The edge of unease just cranks everything right up. Guh.

[identity profile] cupidsbow.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
I just poked. You did all the hard work. :)

[identity profile] 51stcenturyfox.livejournal.com 2010-01-16 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my... word.

Seeing this story first thing in the morning was like waking up and finding a winning lottery ticket taped to my forehead.

So much win.

[identity profile] 51stcenturyfox.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
I really, REALLY like the darkness of the end as well. They're in a sensory deprivation tank, except not. They're completely...conditioned.

It's not just the porning. I'm not that easy, you know!

(But the porn was most excellent, too.)

[identity profile] 51stcenturyfox.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
I think i's perfect ending where it does; the reader's imagination can go to the OMG!impending horror place or the "well, that was weird. Glad it was fixed eventually. Bloody Torchwood!" place.

This sort of thing always happens in time loops. ;)

[identity profile] amand-r.livejournal.com 2010-01-16 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
WOAH WITH THE PORN.

You make me retire from porn. This is it. It is over.

Everyone go home. To wank.

[identity profile] amand-r.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
HAAHAHAHAH WE GOT TO THE HAIRBRUSH AND I WAS LIKE, "JESUS, HOPE."

IT WAS AWESOME.

[identity profile] amand-r.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
lol i loved the part where he broke the wrist strap

[identity profile] amand-r.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
when you have that much scotch in you, everything is an accident.

[identity profile] unstealthy.livejournal.com 2010-01-16 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
OMFG. OMFG.

This is my present. Nobody's ever written anything like this for me before. I'm beyond words. Just beyond words. Thank you thank you thank you. It's exactly the sort of thing I love: lots of character, humour and fabulous sex. And with that little edge of Torchwood darkness.

(And don't you love it that SF means you can conjur up any situation you like in which our heroes have no choice but to have lots and lots of sex?)

Thank you again.

[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com 2010-01-16 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
wow... just wow... (and from a very confirmed Janto shipper that is meant as a compliment!) amazing fic

[identity profile] zsazsa4168.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Five stars out of three!

Your kink has definitely been my kink today. Thanks.

[identity profile] mimarie.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
This is breathtaking. Beautiful, intense, funny, filthy, hot - gorgeous. And this:

The overwhelming chaos of their convergence lasts just a moment; then they sync to Jack’s pounding beat, match the cadence of Gwen’s panting, fuck to the frantic thud of Ianto’s heart.

I swear I can feel my heart hitting every beat of that.

[identity profile] samstjames.livejournal.com 2010-01-18 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my God is this awesome! So hot, so dirty, so... duh, my vocabulary is embarrassingly failing me :D.

[identity profile] curriejean.livejournal.com 2010-01-18 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
GUH. Can't even really express the level of GUH here. I'm amazed at how much textual body you can give a sex scene without ever letting it get redundant in the next or the next.

[identity profile] madame-mary.livejournal.com 2010-01-18 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Bloody brilliant. Simply Wow!!

[identity profile] sanginmychains.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, okay, I just re-read this and was surprised to see no comment from me here, because --

See I've been reading very porny fic for long enough now that it's ceased to be especially arousing. I take it mostly intellectually. I experience pleasure, but it's all mental.

Not to put too fine a point on it, but since I read this? This scenario informs most of my uh, "personal time" fantasies.

Not even kidding.

So - I will be in my bunk. Actually in my bunk. Doing that thing that people are expected to do, while in their bunks.

Probably TMI there.

[identity profile] nancybrown.livejournal.com 2010-06-06 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
That was a really interesting read. :)
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2010-06-06 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, OMG! That's a hot threesome. Really enjoyed this, thanks!

[identity profile] terebi-me.livejournal.com 2011-07-02 04:37 am (UTC)(link)
This is one of the best things I've EVER READ EVER IN MY LIFE.

Immense joy. This is the new gold standard.