I will have to comment later at more length, but this was a hot, brilliant and ever so slightly heartbreaking way to start the day. Your Jack and Ianto are always brilliant horny dudes, but I adore how sexy and demanding you've made Gwen, and how naturally she falls into the threesome.
:D Thank you. I reckon canon tells us pretty clearly that Gwen gives as good as she gets, and that they're an awesome team, so it was all just extrapolation, really ;)
I've noticed that diigolet doesn't work on any dreamwidth pages. Which is part of the reason I just gave up and went entirely back to delicious (the other part being that I couldn't get it to auto-post to Dth either).
I toyed with making it darker - spinning out more the Stockholm Syndrome side of it - but ended up deciding not to because a) the recipient requested humour! and b) I don't know if I'd have the heart to... Even knowing what Jack's capable of, I'd prefer to leave them at being a mindless pleasure machine than all just fucktoys for Jack's issues.
I think i's perfect ending where it does; the reader's imagination can go to the OMG!impending horror place or the "well, that was weird. Glad it was fixed eventually. Bloody Torchwood!" place.
This sort of thing always happens in time loops. ;)
Yay porn. My god, it wouldn't stop with this one. Even as Cathy was doing the final beta the other night, I found myself thinking "oooh, THAT would be hot! I should add that! They'd totally do it!"
That's the problem with timeloop stories. YOU CAN JUST KEEP GOING ON AND ON WITH INCREASINGLY HEDONISTIC SHIT.
There was a whole other CCTV+bondage scene that I just had to decide NOT to write. In part because writing 18,000 words in five days gave me tendonitis.
:D DON'T BLAME ME, IT'S JUST PURE JACK CHARACTERISATION.
This is my present. Nobody's ever written anything like this for me before. I'm beyond words. Just beyond words. Thank you thank you thank you. It's exactly the sort of thing I love: lots of character, humour and fabulous sex. And with that little edge of Torchwood darkness.
(And don't you love it that SF means you can conjur up any situation you like in which our heroes have no choice but to have lots and lots of sex?)
Wheeee! PHEW. I am so glad you like it!! I had moments of panic that there was too much kink, or too much darkness for the 'humour' that you asked for, but then...
Yeah, like you said re:SF. It's all very well to come up with the cracky scenarios, but then you have to let them play out and seriously consider how they'd affect the characters. That's why this ended up being so long. And porny. *g*
:D :D It was my pleasure to write. Thank you for providing the seed that grew this into existence :)
This is breathtaking. Beautiful, intense, funny, filthy, hot - gorgeous. And this:
The overwhelming chaos of their convergence lasts just a moment; then they sync to Jack’s pounding beat, match the cadence of Gwen’s panting, fuck to the frantic thud of Ianto’s heart.
I swear I can feel my heart hitting every beat of that.
GUH. Can't even really express the level of GUH here. I'm amazed at how much textual body you can give a sex scene without ever letting it get redundant in the next or the next.
Oh wow, okay, I just re-read this and was surprised to see no comment from me here, because --
See I've been reading very porny fic for long enough now that it's ceased to be especially arousing. I take it mostly intellectually. I experience pleasure, but it's all mental.
Not to put too fine a point on it, but since I read this? This scenario informs most of my uh, "personal time" fantasies.
Not even kidding.
So - I will be in my bunk. Actually in my bunk. Doing that thing that people are expected to do, while in their bunks.
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:D
It kind of breaks my heart a little, knowing that Jack knows they're stuck there, that it's his fault. But that's very Jack, isn't it?
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And yup, very Jack. They're alive! and never in any permanent danger! and he gets to shag them! forever! What could possibly be wrong with that?
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Cheers!
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Ianto is quite appealing when he gets his devious on, as it were
Some of the best porn ever!!!
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I'm very glad you enjoyed it :)
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Seeing this story first thing in the morning was like waking up and finding a winning lottery ticket taped to my forehead.
So much win.
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Thank you :)
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It's not just the porning. I'm not that easy, you know!
(But the porn was most excellent, too.)
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Anyhoo! Yay :)
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This sort of thing always happens in time loops. ;)
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You make me retire from porn. This is it. It is over.
Everyone go home. To wank.
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That's the problem with timeloop stories. YOU CAN JUST KEEP GOING ON AND ON WITH INCREASINGLY HEDONISTIC SHIT.
Phew.
<3 Thank you omg.
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IT WAS AWESOME.
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There was a whole other CCTV+bondage scene that I just had to decide NOT to write. In part because writing 18,000 words in five days gave me tendonitis.
:D DON'T BLAME ME, IT'S JUST PURE JACK CHARACTERISATION.
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This is my present. Nobody's ever written anything like this for me before. I'm beyond words. Just beyond words. Thank you thank you thank you. It's exactly the sort of thing I love: lots of character, humour and fabulous sex. And with that little edge of Torchwood darkness.
(And don't you love it that SF means you can conjur up any situation you like in which our heroes have no choice but to have lots and lots of sex?)
Thank you again.
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Yeah, like you said re:SF. It's all very well to come up with the cracky scenarios, but then you have to let them play out and seriously consider how they'd affect the characters. That's why this ended up being so long. And porny. *g*
:D :D It was my pleasure to write. Thank you for providing the seed that grew this into existence :)
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Your kink has definitely been my kink today. Thanks.
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The overwhelming chaos of their convergence lasts just a moment; then they sync to Jack’s pounding beat, match the cadence of Gwen’s panting, fuck to the frantic thud of Ianto’s heart.
I swear I can feel my heart hitting every beat of that.
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But, woot. Glad you enjoyed it :D
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See I've been reading very porny fic for long enough now that it's ceased to be especially arousing. I take it mostly intellectually. I experience pleasure, but it's all mental.
Not to put too fine a point on it, but since I read this? This scenario informs most of my uh, "personal time" fantasies.
Not even kidding.
So - I will be in my bunk. Actually in my bunk. Doing that thing that people are expected to do, while in their bunks.
Probably TMI there.
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Thank you!
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Immense joy. This is the new gold standard.
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