hope: Art of a woman writing from tour poster (torchwood three (3))
puddingsmith ([personal profile] hope) wrote2010-01-16 07:20 pm
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hope: Art of a woman writing from tour poster (torchwood three (3))

[personal profile] hope 2010-01-17 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Yeah, it crossed my mind when I was writing that you might enjoy it. I'm super-glad that premonition turned out to be true :D

Thank you :)

[identity profile] 51stcenturyfox.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
I really, REALLY like the darkness of the end as well. They're in a sensory deprivation tank, except not. They're completely...conditioned.

It's not just the porning. I'm not that easy, you know!

(But the porn was most excellent, too.)
hope: Art of a woman writing from tour poster (gwen O.O)

[personal profile] hope 2010-01-17 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
I toyed with making it darker - spinning out more the Stockholm Syndrome side of it - but ended up deciding not to because a) the recipient requested humour! and b) I don't know if I'd have the heart to... Even knowing what Jack's capable of, I'd prefer to leave them at being a mindless pleasure machine than all just fucktoys for Jack's issues.

Anyhoo! Yay :)

[identity profile] 51stcenturyfox.livejournal.com 2010-01-17 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
I think i's perfect ending where it does; the reader's imagination can go to the OMG!impending horror place or the "well, that was weird. Glad it was fixed eventually. Bloody Torchwood!" place.

This sort of thing always happens in time loops. ;)
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